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for Vacation at Altamira

by dragonman

person denise
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please do a chapter of Kratos and Raine
person Blaze Waterflower
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Aeox
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
. . .Wow. Raine sounds like a complete whore when she's playing with herself.
. . .Not that I'm complaining.
. . .Please update.
person man 3597
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow I did not see that coming
person tehd00dness
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter. I didn't think this would get updated, because it was so deep in the pile of stories. The end of this chapter intrigues me. (Probably because it has Lloyd/Raine stuffs?) Perhaps the next chapter will delve into Raine's....erm, dream?
person tehd00dness
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I request Lloyd/Raine for the next chapter. Very much appreciated I will be if you do that.
person Hikaru Irving
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my, Raine has fantasies . . .lol! She's probably masturbating, imagining the guys fucking her, judging from how . . .*ahem* I'm only guessing!!
PLEASE UPDATE!!
~*~*~*~Hikaru Irving~*~*~*~
person coolchick
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i loved both chapters please make the 3rd chapter a lot more stuff in it
well cant wait till the 3rd one well
buhbye
me
person MoonGun
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Since you have already included the ones of Raine/Lloyd why not make it go intense? Since Raine/Lloyd has been included while it was Lloyd/Colette then why not have Genis/Sheena hmm?
person sirhcnotlih
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good!

Keep it up!

5 out of 5!