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Wow! Excellent description. Ashley and Leon do make a better pairing.

Nice, very nice indeed.

That was really good, it was well detailed and not campy at all. It even fits with the game kinda. Very good lemon, ya did well. You get a gold sticker!

this is the best fanfiction i have read in awile.

This is very well writen cant wait to see what you come up with next time.

awesome, simply awesome, this is an absolutely fantastic fic, I loved every minute of it, eventhough i got lost a couple times it's still perfect.

Wow that was amazing and very sweet. I've newly been introduced to this couple but liked it. You've captured them quite well and really had Leon being very 'down-to-earth' which was good. His quirky comments and the way his sounds of pleasure were mentioned was a very nice touch and made the character seem more 'manly' and realistic in a way.
You really did justice to the characters, especially with the little things, like Leon getting a call from Hunnigan, him dealing with the wolves, Ashley sitting back to watch him while he slept out of curiosity and her commenting on how she couldnt go as deep as he would like.
Those kinds of things are really good touches in stories.
Great and wonderful work.

-Mel

Great job! The actual story wasn't boring or baseless, the way the characters acted(aside from the sexual scenes) felt natural, and all the pervertedness was great. Keep up the good work

feeling...kind...of...hot....

I love how they just kept teasing each other, it was so cute. ^^ Even though Ashley isn't my favorite, it was still adorible. And the line, "Baby, I'd die for you"--AWWWWW! *giggles*