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for A Little Friendly Sparring

by Nicolle

person Ashley
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was so steamy and alluring. I love how you write, it kept vivid pictures circulating throughout the story.
Please consider more SOII. Maybe Maria and Cliff? We need interesting couples.
person Wicked_Mistress
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice...Just the type of situation that Alnel would so end up in.... ~_- me likey.
person Cerulean San
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome :3! I love AlbelNel! <3<3<3
person sterlingwings900
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was good, though a little rushed. prolong it a bit, its good to read a lemon that is descriptive. write another one and make it longer!