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by REYaoi

person Mezinka
schedule November 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I'm loving this! Please tell me there is going to be a chapter 4, I must know what happens!
person Kraken
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is it wrong to find Leon abuse so damn hot?
Nah, why else would anyone be reading this story then. :P
In all seriousness, this is really well-written and sexy, despite the lack of actual intercourse. For some reason, Krauser's dirty talk here seems way more intimate than a lot of smut in other stories. Great job!
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely top dog of sadistic Leon stories. It is perfectly detailed that you yourself can feel and just see how the characters reacted. Most importantly, it stays true to the characters personalities. You stay true to the wicked, cold and arrogant personality of Krauser. You put it very nicely so the reader follows what the characters were thinking and how Leon rationalized about what decision he should make and what not. Very great job, I'm sad that it ended so soon!
person delonariel
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it ^_^ who knows why leon-abuse is so appealing.
there were some few misstakes, but hardly any worth mentioning. The one thing that I got stuck on was the elecrecution... Err, the current would have transferred to anyone with skin-contact to leon -the captors-, and probably jack too what with the wet floor ^^;
person Kal
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, are you ever gonna finish this fic?

You're doing a great job, don't leave like this, let me see a few more chapters and then I give you
a decent review.
person Reina
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An amazingly well written fic! ^__^ I love how you characterize Krauser and Leon so well, and how all the smexiness just flows through your story. *squeals* Please write more as soon as you can!
person sephykoi
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh... This is hot. I love it. In fact, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Demanding!Krauser is sexy as hell :3

~the Seph
person J.J.
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gotta say, there's definitely something arousing about Krauser in this fic. Most definitely. Compared to other fics with little or no plot to them, I have to say that this is one of the best Krauser/Leon pairings I've read. On the other hand, I was curious as to Krauser's reasons for choosing Leon to have fun with before he left. I mean, he could have easily taken on of the guys who hangs out with him without a problem. Why did he choose Leon? Other than that, I'd have to say this is pretty decent, definitely had me re-reading it just for the shivers it sent down my spine.
person Kalas
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOA O_O That's really good... Holy crap im at a loss for words here..... yum. That's all. yum. and update. Those are the first thoughts that came. UPDATE..........................................yum
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm, who was the one who said Leon was hot, and not to bother with plot?? I wonder? Great stuff here, look forward to more. Thanks for your review by the way, it is appreciated!