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by AkikazeGou

schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ayup! OOC! But if both of them were in character, they woudn't be having sex. Of the two, Ryu seems less likely to make a pass, since he's all serious, so it has to be her. She's almost as unlikely to initiate sex as he is (probably why so many erodoujin with her have to involve drugs or rape), but at least it's imaginable. I'll finish up this story in another part or two, and I might try and work on a more realistic/romantic followup after. With smut, of course.
person capcomfreak4life
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
those 2 sure were proud of themselves... that was close to mind-numbing for me too, esp. with the music i had playing at the time!
DAAAAMMMN!!! you're good!
person ni9htdreame12
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!! can't wait for more.
person FuMan Skeeto
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ei, that was really nice. hope update on that soon. oh, and i checked out your profile here aff, and i noticed that you also go for d/hr. it would be nice if you'd write something with the d/hr pairing.