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for Pride

by AkikazeGou

person ni9htdreame12
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update!
person NinaSama
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot! Awesome story and it doesn’t matter who’s out of character because the way you wrote it makes their characters all the better! Don’t stop writing! You have talent! Also, as for the anatomy of the entire situation, I’ll admit that it was a little off. Being a girl and not a virgin, I got sore just imagining it! But it doesn’t matter, cuz I loved the characters and your long descriptions were perfect! Keep up the good work!!!!
person Jes
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was really, really hot. This is easily the best lemon I've read in a while. You've gotta write more.
person Anon
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! This fic is hot!! Please continue!!
person Dream
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Is that the end?...HOW CAN THAT BE THE END? Please let it not be the end! Pleeeeeeeeeeeease add some more. Pretty please? ^.^
person CWolf
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has to be the best Chun-li/Ryu posted here. I liked it how you wrote this in Chun-Li's POV too, great work.
person O.o
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was pretty... Strange.

I'm quite willing to bet that you've never had sex before, and am certain that your knowledge of basic anatomy is severely lacking. The cervix doesn't just open up, the clitoris isn't internal, and a guy actually screwing a girl's *uterus* would in all likelihood cause some severe physical damage. You're either a virgin that's watched/read entirely too much tentacle porn or you really need to do your homework.
person yf17
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a great lemon.

Thanks Akikaze for writing such a hot number. I especially enjoyed your use of slangs and humor. And the damn hot descriptions.

Would love to see you continue this line of work with the SF series.

Looking forward to your next update!
person darkxkunoichi
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... very nice... its been a while since ive read a great ryu/chunli lemon. keep writing! i would love to read more... :P
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice! But Chun-Li's rather out of character, btw?