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-A potential sequel to ICoBK: I’m considering it. I have some ideas. Big, time consuming ideas. I have a prologue written. The leathery unf unf unf of koopa lovemaking holds an irresistible allure for me. The thing is, I’m hesitant to commit to the project. Cause this sucker would be big, and I’m not sure I could handle its hugeness right now."

I for one look forward to it. Bring on the hugeness =)

Awesome! Not only was it hot, but it was a captivating story! Often, a story lacks in one area or another... But not yours! Oh, and you did Bowser really well. Nice one. ^^

~He would trace out the alphabet, letter-by-letter, on her clit, and stop only to penetrate her inner lips with his tongue.~

That has to be one of the most sensual lines ever written in a story such as this. Great job. It's nice to see Bowser find love.

Very nice. I really like it. In fact, the only thing I think could stand to be expanded on would be if you were to give this story a sequel. You do leave a number of things that could always be told...like for instance, how would the Marios and the Mushroom Kingdom be affected by Bowser being boo'd up, at least? ^^

this story is awesome! but can u make a story from mario and luigi partners in time the pairing is luigi and princess shroob not the fat one but the first princess you battle if you can make it id appreciate it!

You have accomplished a lot with this story. The first very good thing is Bowser. Often when the villain is the star, writers will screw up, turning the villain into some misunderstood ne'er do well. It's important that the audience can sympathize with the villain, but I doubt very much that they want to see the character butchered. You've made Bowser into a good antihero, but you've also made him an asshole, which is what he is.

The other good part is how well you've managed all the different emotional twists in the story. It's funny, sad, sexy and downright depressing in turn, and all of them work.

Finally, this story reminded me a lot of the Dark Tower series, which is largely about how the world is "winding down," and various wars and catastrophes are all signs of doom. The various events in the story remind of the Dark Tower (with Robotnik taking over Sonic's land and so on), and I was just wondering if the various gaming worlds are winding down as well.If so, will we see a sequel, or at least anything else written by you? You're a good writer, and I'd read any story you created.

wow...deep down, i felt that koopa was really a great guy...errr...snapping turtle...dragon...man...hehehe. Wonderful story. I also liked that sweet, lonely Luigi also got himself a nice gf, who hopefully, will settle down, and become respectable as she told koopa before. Encore.

Aww, happy ending. Yep, I definitely liked this story, it's like Super Smash Brothers Melee's dramatic, romancey big brother. And I'm still snickering over Bowser's note to Cloud, heehee. And your writing style works well too, so please do keep writing!

Good Work

Great writing, keep it up!