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by Musashden

schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are a genius at TornxJak. Read all three of the stories I saw by you. Seriously, you are a god XDDD.
person GMB
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!

Are you going to do one for Jak X too?

I hope so.. :D

~GMB~
person Ookamiluv
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHHHHHHHHHH YYYEEEEEEEEAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!
Loved it more than I love myself!
I DEMAND that you write more and send them to me!
Do you here me?!
ENCORE!!!!!!!
Just beautiful!
You are a great writter, continue your writtings! And I shall read it with a passion < that's if I had time! ;/>
Seeya!
_Ookami!
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww....that was sooooo sweet. I loved it. You did such a good job on these three fics. Hot! lol. Keep up the amazing work! Hope to read more of your work!

-Black-
person sole
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great work, hope you write other fictions soon!
person Siarra
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I was detecting something that vaguely looked like a plot but luckily I lost sight of it thanks to all that hot sex.
It was wonderful how you wrote Torn not to admit how much he had really missed Jak. The spelling was still a little off, but otherwise this fic was a very nice piece of sweet Jak/Torn lovin'.