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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe!
First off, lemme say this: I'm SO happy that Saddler's not dead!! :D
^^; Call me sick and twisted, but he's hot, demanding, sexy... *nyars* X3 I blame my submissive uke nature, and my penchant for BDSM and aggressive semes, as well as my love for psychotic, sensual megalomaniacs (Sephiroth... @_@ *drools... dies*) that fuels my perception of your Saddler. :D
Ohh.... Leon's fuckin' adoreable!!! *squees and glomps him* He's funny too. XDDD Many parts of your fic made me either squeee in yaoi&seme-obsessed delight, or be like, "OMG!! :3" #_X Wow, I've no idea what to put here and I apologize for spamming what's supposed to be your really cool review with my incessant babbling of fangirl squeals and joys. >_>; Yeah. I'll stop now. o.o;
*ahem* I read this fic straight through within the last few days. o.x;;; Yep... Chapter 1~15. ^^; I also reviewed and read your very hot and interesting prologue fic, and am going to Dark Ashes soon. :D;;;
... Call me retarded, but I can't seem to say what I wanna say. The words are stuck, ya know? 'cause I can't express just how awesomely I love your fic. o.o;;;;;
*dies*
~the Seph
First off, lemme say this: I'm SO happy that Saddler's not dead!! :D
^^; Call me sick and twisted, but he's hot, demanding, sexy... *nyars* X3 I blame my submissive uke nature, and my penchant for BDSM and aggressive semes, as well as my love for psychotic, sensual megalomaniacs (Sephiroth... @_@ *drools... dies*) that fuels my perception of your Saddler. :D
Ohh.... Leon's fuckin' adoreable!!! *squees and glomps him* He's funny too. XDDD Many parts of your fic made me either squeee in yaoi&seme-obsessed delight, or be like, "OMG!! :3" #_X Wow, I've no idea what to put here and I apologize for spamming what's supposed to be your really cool review with my incessant babbling of fangirl squeals and joys. >_>; Yeah. I'll stop now. o.o;
*ahem* I read this fic straight through within the last few days. o.x;;; Yep... Chapter 1~15. ^^; I also reviewed and read your very hot and interesting prologue fic, and am going to Dark Ashes soon. :D;;;
... Call me retarded, but I can't seem to say what I wanna say. The words are stuck, ya know? 'cause I can't express just how awesomely I love your fic. o.o;;;;;
*dies*
~the Seph
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To Diamond I like this story I would also like to add I am published author your being a very rude foolish little girl I know good good work when I see it! and maiafay is very good! keep up the good maiafay!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say I do beilve I am now addicted to both this story and its sequal. Unlike a few others I beilve your style of writing is uniqe
and quite a breath of fresh-air to some other writing I have seen while reading and reviewing slash stories. As well as the couple isnt
much written on, sadly enough some people do want to see more and yet even sadder there isnt much on it, as well as having enough
creativity to expand upon the species of the game without making it into a total mess ^^'' Unlike me whom blothes it beyond reconiztion. I do hope you continue your series no matter what they have a unique 'Flavor' all their own. However with all this there are a few spelling errors but nothing of severe consiquence. I too know of the horror of on-line translators and know how interesting
results can become off of them, I recommend BabelFish.com if you havent found them already they seem to be quite accurate comappered to other translator sites, if you need help ill be around reading your story ^^'' I dont leave to easly I hope you dont mind to badly. Dont worry some reviwers will always give bad or useless adivce and some of us get flamed every day. I do hope this was useful to you somehow I have left my e-mail so that you can contact me if you wish.
Keep up the good work!
~Heattless_Angel
and quite a breath of fresh-air to some other writing I have seen while reading and reviewing slash stories. As well as the couple isnt
much written on, sadly enough some people do want to see more and yet even sadder there isnt much on it, as well as having enough
creativity to expand upon the species of the game without making it into a total mess ^^'' Unlike me whom blothes it beyond reconiztion. I do hope you continue your series no matter what they have a unique 'Flavor' all their own. However with all this there are a few spelling errors but nothing of severe consiquence. I too know of the horror of on-line translators and know how interesting
results can become off of them, I recommend BabelFish.com if you havent found them already they seem to be quite accurate comappered to other translator sites, if you need help ill be around reading your story ^^'' I dont leave to easly I hope you dont mind to badly. Dont worry some reviwers will always give bad or useless adivce and some of us get flamed every day. I do hope this was useful to you somehow I have left my e-mail so that you can contact me if you wish.
Keep up the good work!
~Heattless_Angel
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One thing I don't understand is why flames exist to begin with. Your story is somewhat controversial I will admit but there always will be a back button. I suppose some people just like to debate.
I'm getting side-tracked on this point however. As far as literary merit I'd say that this is a good example o something rarely seen in any lemons- a plot. In fact, this one is so well written that I DID put it down before I went to bed and then pulled it back up first thing in the morning. This included so many things that were difficult to forsee. It really was difficult to know what Leon would do in each situation. Obviously there was lust, but there was much more in his stuggle. He wasn't OOC. I always thought of Leon as too much of a golden boy myself. I actually have a slightly different view of characters now than before this read.
Congrats on such a gratifying piece.
-SR
I'm getting side-tracked on this point however. As far as literary merit I'd say that this is a good example o something rarely seen in any lemons- a plot. In fact, this one is so well written that I DID put it down before I went to bed and then pulled it back up first thing in the morning. This included so many things that were difficult to forsee. It really was difficult to know what Leon would do in each situation. Obviously there was lust, but there was much more in his stuggle. He wasn't OOC. I always thought of Leon as too much of a golden boy myself. I actually have a slightly different view of characters now than before this read.
Congrats on such a gratifying piece.
-SR
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
guh....I am speechless.
so the HOTTEST game fic I have ever come across. The tentacles, and the...I am lost for words with how much th is affects me.
I won't lie to you, occasionally I was jarred out of the fic by an odd word choice or two, however it in no way distracted me from the absolute fantasticness of this AU you have created. I freakin love the whole concept of the Indigos, and the various castes within the plagas.
I think I want to marry this fic and have it's horny tentacle babies.
Also, whilst reading this I may or may not have cackled and shouted "Yes! Leon is a SLUT ZOMBIE!" But that's beside the point entirely.
so the HOTTEST game fic I have ever come across. The tentacles, and the...I am lost for words with how much th is affects me.
I won't lie to you, occasionally I was jarred out of the fic by an odd word choice or two, however it in no way distracted me from the absolute fantasticness of this AU you have created. I freakin love the whole concept of the Indigos, and the various castes within the plagas.
I think I want to marry this fic and have it's horny tentacle babies.
Also, whilst reading this I may or may not have cackled and shouted "Yes! Leon is a SLUT ZOMBIE!" But that's beside the point entirely.
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even though you can't stand Ada because she's hard to understand, that doesn't mean Leon can't stand her. If you played RE2, you'd know that she never means to hurt or shoot Leon. In RE4 Leon gave her the sample so that the subplot regarding Wesker's doings would have merit. Although this story is well thought out, it saddens me to see Ada simply written off as having become a whore so that Leon can conveniently drop all feelings for her, go completely out of character and be paired off with other people while the author gets some wish fulfillment out of it.
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! That was awesome. I usually avoid Wesker stories like the plague, but you've drawn me in. He's actually interesting to me here. I just love the way he keeps wanting a little 'taste' of Leon. I wouldn't mind tasting him myself if it weren't for that whole death by draining of life force thing.
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoah! first I thought that the story was gonna end right there in chapter 14 but luckily not! :) (have to remember to read next time with more attention)
I hav liked this story wery uch since the beginning and I am even more thrilled over the fact that you´re making the next part. If I have learned anything about your style it will mean a long story with long chapters. (me likey)
You rock girl! The show must go on! :D
Btw your art is simply fabulous and that is a terrible crime that you haven´t draw any Indigo Leon or Wesker. With that kind of talent it shouldn´t be problem.
And one question, what happened to Chris??? Somehow I get the feeling from your writing that he is dead, but is that really so? Please let me know, I can´t find damn information about that anywhere.
I am holding my breath til the next chapter. ;) Ciyao then!
I hav liked this story wery uch since the beginning and I am even more thrilled over the fact that you´re making the next part. If I have learned anything about your style it will mean a long story with long chapters. (me likey)
You rock girl! The show must go on! :D
Btw your art is simply fabulous and that is a terrible crime that you haven´t draw any Indigo Leon or Wesker. With that kind of talent it shouldn´t be problem.
And one question, what happened to Chris??? Somehow I get the feeling from your writing that he is dead, but is that really so? Please let me know, I can´t find damn information about that anywhere.
I am holding my breath til the next chapter. ;) Ciyao then!
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! ^_^ Great story! -__- Sorry I've never reviewed for any of the chappters, but I really liked your story! ^_^ I think I'll start reviewing for your stories starting on your next story, k? Well review to ya nect time! ^_^ Ja Ne!
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*stares at screen*
Holy fucking God on a pogo-stick...
THAT WAS FUCKING BRILLANT!!! Everything down to the writing, witty comebacks(I love the "I'm Evil" neon sign), Wesker wanting to molest Leon in front of the crowd(bastard would probably get off on that) and the way you ended it. How you've delt with the characters, their emotions and reactions to the past is a complete breath of fresh air. It's like reading a novel that you just can't put down! I eagerly await Dark Ashes with my entire being.
PS: I love how what you've done to the Merchant! Especially the last scene of him and the 'lab rats' was hysterical and left me in tears. Although when I was playing the game, I noticed that when it was daylight outside, his eyes were back to blue instead of red. Probably nothing, but I love Thomas the Merchant. If he too was a BOW, then that would explain how he constantly kept appearing even after leaving an area then coming back!
PSS: I love you, pure and simple :)
Holy fucking God on a pogo-stick...
THAT WAS FUCKING BRILLANT!!! Everything down to the writing, witty comebacks(I love the "I'm Evil" neon sign), Wesker wanting to molest Leon in front of the crowd(bastard would probably get off on that) and the way you ended it. How you've delt with the characters, their emotions and reactions to the past is a complete breath of fresh air. It's like reading a novel that you just can't put down! I eagerly await Dark Ashes with my entire being.
PS: I love how what you've done to the Merchant! Especially the last scene of him and the 'lab rats' was hysterical and left me in tears. Although when I was playing the game, I noticed that when it was daylight outside, his eyes were back to blue instead of red. Probably nothing, but I love Thomas the Merchant. If he too was a BOW, then that would explain how he constantly kept appearing even after leaving an area then coming back!
PSS: I love you, pure and simple :)