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*Hands Anon above some tissues* Here ya go sweetie, this is for them bleeding eyes of yours...seems to be alot of that going around...wow, hope it isn't contagious.

Pssst...something you might want to think about dear...Maiafay's story was posted and completed before any copycats. 0.o Yeah...uh, just look at the dates.

Oh, but wait, maybe those bleeding eyes of yours got in the way...take my tissue and clean those would you? Thanks babe.

Wooie... I love it when people have nothing else better to do with their time other than spout out shit. Eyes bleeding? Hon... try to use a better insult. If you wanted to get revenge on Maiafay, you didn't do the trick. ;) Just to assure you, darlin'.

So fuck off and crawl back into the pathetic hole you came from. No one needs to hear your lame attempts to flame someone who didn't deserve it in the first place.

Have a nice day, bitch.

just to let you know, i think i have become obsessed of tentacle foreplay!!ive been searching fiction sites for tentacle play....look what you have done to me....this and that orlando bloom story...your a naughty gurl......got any suggestions where i can read more tentacle/yaoi... -wink-

bloody frickin aweseome

I just recently started playing Resident Evil 4 for the first time. It was a total breakaway for me from the normal happy adventuring games. And I have to tell you, I don't think I want to finish playing the game. I am enjoying reading your AU version too much to pick up the controller.

Your storytelling powers are amazing. I don't even know where to begin praising your work. The scenarios are so real and believable, the character interaction is so convincing, and the descriptions of actions and events are mouth-watering. I had begun reading "Dark Ashes of the Phoenix" first but backtracked to this fic and I am -glad- I did. It explained alot. And that scene between Leon and Ashley? I only wish there were more encounters like that! The male/male pairings are good but the descriptions of the Leon/random female encounters are absolutely tantalizing.

The minor and occasional spelling or syntax errors are completely overshadowed by all the talent and genious that went into this fiction. It almost doesn't feel like fanfiction -- it feels like an AU novel written by a true author. Hey, if you still need a beta reader -- as I'd seen you mention in the beginning of DAotP -- I would be more than happy to fill that role. I am certainly doing my research here by staying up late reading your fiction...

Fabulous fabulous FABULOUS job. Don't stop writing anytime soon! Here's to more late nights!

I'm not sure if I reviewed this, but if I already did, oh well. I really enjoyed this fanfic, it was well written and I think you handled Leon's character and emotions beautifully. Some of the scenes were a little...ew, but it IS RE4. I have to say it again, great job!

Heh, forgive me for coming to the site to read your stuff, but what you sent me was just too small for my eyes.

Just finished Chapter One. This normally isn't the type of stuff I read. (IE, stuff that belongs to fandoms I know nothing about) but you do a good job with letting the reader know enough that I can follow it, without throwing too much at me.

Your writing itself is excellent. You mentioned once in a review for me that you didn't have a beta. If you hadn't told me, I never would have known.

Let me just say that I am not a fan of AU stories. They tend to bother me on basic principle, but the flow and style of your story was effective in keeping me hooked.

Some of the more sexual scenes weren't really my... um... scene, if you will, but nevertheless, impressive writing carried me through.

Apart from some minor spelling errors, I noticed that the S.D. Perry-ish italic-inner-monologue technique in your chapters became a tad unclear in certain parts, switching perspective from Ashley to Leon without warning. I was able to follow the non-existent transition, but since you said you were still attempting to tweak your finished story, I'm just offering a heads up.

Good work. Not my cup of tea, but good work all the same.

god work my friend keep it up

I admit i have been a lurker for a long time on these fics...mostly because I read them at work (when I am not suppose too) and forget to leave a note saying how much I like the tale. So, I do want to say your characterzation (mispelled again) of Wesker is awesome! I love the bad attitude and how much he is in control. I also like the new abilties you have given him--the hand in the elctricity field was a great visual! also the ending was funny. Not that what happened to leon was funny, but the whole merchant thing was great.

So, just wanted to spare a moment and let you know that.