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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello there!
Kudos to you with what you've posted so far. I'm honestly impressed by your writing style and it's something I can honestly enjoy.
Having placed the story as the focal point of this story, rather than the sex, is something I can truly appreciate and is something I agree with.
So... well, yeah. :)
Hope you update soon!
P.S What's your DeviantArt address? I'd be interested in checking out your works. :)
Kudos to you with what you've posted so far. I'm honestly impressed by your writing style and it's something I can honestly enjoy.
Having placed the story as the focal point of this story, rather than the sex, is something I can truly appreciate and is something I agree with.
So... well, yeah. :)
Hope you update soon!
P.S What's your DeviantArt address? I'd be interested in checking out your works. :)
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! So, you're re-writing this. That's so wonderful to see. I enjoyed the first version of this. It was pretty rough in patches, but the idea was so much fun it stuck with me. Now, seeing it re-written so well, I'm really excited. Your prose has gotten tighter and your speech patterns are more accurate. I don't know what kind of update schedule for this you have planned, but I do hope I get to read more soon!
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I keep rereading it and hoping for an update, part of me keeps wishing that the original were still up so I could read the rest of that but I'm definately looking forward to more of the revised. Keep it up and update when you can.
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You updated! I really like the way this is turning out, it has an entirely new feel to it, from the way it was written before, while still being the same...sorry rambling, just glad the next chapter is up. thank you!
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, I look forward to more, keep up the amazing work.
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
woah. this is trippy. very different from the original version. more cruel, darker... the other was soft compared to this version!! and were're only 3 chapters in!
the plaga interaction is crazy! it sounds like in this one its going to give leon way more hell than in the first version.
and i loved getting into leons memories too!... cute little tidbits there.
well, im excited like a litte kid over this story. update asap.
the plaga interaction is crazy! it sounds like in this one its going to give leon way more hell than in the first version.
and i loved getting into leons memories too!... cute little tidbits there.
well, im excited like a litte kid over this story. update asap.
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow definitly different then the orginal version, it seems that Leon is more excepting of his new nature then before. He's no longer quite the white martyer knight huh? *smiles* I like. Run Ashely run! hehe. I wonder if he will come back to his boy scout senses before he captures her or if he'll kill her...and not regret it? hmm...well anyway please please please please please please update! I loved it the first time and now this new version has my full attention. I really can't wait to see what happens next! more please!
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was reading this story the first time through, very much enjoying it, but lost track when my computer fried itself. Now that I've found this fic again, I see you've decided to rewrite it. And as improved as it is thus far, the lack of recent updates leads me to believe you've lost interest.
That makes a small part of me want to break down and cry... the part that refuses to accept when a fandom is dying. *sighs* Any how, I'll still come around now and then, to see if you've updated. It's all I can do...
That makes a small part of me want to break down and cry... the part that refuses to accept when a fandom is dying. *sighs* Any how, I'll still come around now and then, to see if you've updated. It's all I can do...
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey all,
I will update this and Ashes. Unfortunately, I work two jobs, draw professionally and procrastinate like no tomorrow. However, I won't abandon this story arc and will update in the future. Thanks :)
I will update this and Ashes. Unfortunately, I work two jobs, draw professionally and procrastinate like no tomorrow. However, I won't abandon this story arc and will update in the future. Thanks :)
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey maiafay, hoping for another dazzling update soon.