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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You updated! Whew, been on vacation. This story is so good. I love how you write. I can't wait to see another update from you! Great job! Your story is wonderful.
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Goodness, I love this story. I enjoy how you represent the characters attitude and feelings, very good. I'm glad you don't rush with this story. I think it's going just fine with the way you are handling it now. I'd love to read more, reguardless if the slash is presented in the next chapter or not. By the way, the POV of the plaga was great. Hope to see an update soon.
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read over it twice, it was just as good the second time. I really like how you displayed Saddler's character and I did not think there was anything wrong with the ending. Great detail and insight on the plaga. Oh and who can forget the superb Leon torture! I would love to see the next chapter soon.
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February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job with the last chapter, as with the others. I love the storyline to this one, I'm not reading it for just the slashy pairings. Though that indeed drew my attention, but I am caught up in the concept of the story. I hope to see another chapter from you soon.
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February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I neeeeed the next chapter. I am so into this story, it's just amazing. I am really want to see some slash as well! Really, I don't care if there's slash in the next chapter or not. As long as you update, I'm happy.
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As much as I was looking forward to the slashyness, I'm glad you wrote this chapter. The part where Ashley got caugt staring at his ass made me laugh, probably more than it should have. Anyway, I hope you update soon.
This site is not very good with people giving reviews. I guess after they read all the smut they do.......other things instead of reviewing. O_o
This site is not very good with people giving reviews. I guess after they read all the smut they do.......other things instead of reviewing. O_o
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is soooo good. I want more! Update soon please. Ashley's a little pervert!
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I love how your going with the story, makes it all the more interesting. There wasn't even sex in that scene really, but the way Leon was acting made it hot! I hope you update soon.
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was great! I loved it so much. I can't wait to find out what happens next. The whole story line is just amazing in my opinion. Great work.
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! I just stumbled across this. To be honest I wasn't expecting much and now I'm officially really likeing this fic. I hope to read more soon.