rate_review Reviews

This story is excellent I loved it. Can't wait to read more. I've been back several times to see if you updated. Keep up the great work

*twitches* You... Stopped. *twitches* In... the... middle. *twitches*
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo CRUEL!!!!!!!!!!!
*claws at screen* I feel for Leon now, do you know that? To leave AT THAT ONE POINT!!!!!
AAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
I love it! The descriptions, the characters, the sex/porn. I love it all!
Ignore the flamers. You've posted plently of warning and if they choose to flame/annoy you, they can go write their own shit. Don't listen to what a few narrow-minded few have to say, do they write their own stories? do they pour all their time into their own stories? Probably not. Just ignore the ignorant shits and let them knaw on each another.
Besides! This is fanfiction! Anything can happen!
Update soon? Please? I'll ummm.... ummm... *grabs rocket launcher* point and click?

I have to say that this fic is bloody brilliant and I could not stop reading! Saddler is a right arrogant bastard but I still like the portrayal of him! Poor Leon! I can't wait to see what happens next! I must know!

Damn it has been a while since I got to read this story. The last two chapters were great. I love how Leon was reacting to everything that was happening, how much more control he was losing and the plaga disappearing (sort of). There were many things that I enjoyed and want to comment on, but that would take forever. I can say you did a wonderful explaining everything and your ability to write detail was as wonderful as ever. Leon is constantly being hounded with one problem after another and you do a good job at capturing his thoughts on everything and his reactions to them are what I think fits his character. You made Saddler such an annoying arrogant bastard, which is dead on in my opinion. All in all, you did great and left me hanging, I hope to see what is going to happen next soon. Good luck and great job.

Hi! let me just start by saying....I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH!!!!!! the lemons so far kind of creeped me out, because of who Leon was doing, but I absolutely love the scenes with Ashley. I lovve the plot and the story keeps me on edge. will Leon and Ashley get together??? for good, i mean. not just as a feeding. because i really love that pairing. well, anyway, you must update soon, because i'm going crazy with anticipation! keeping writeing more ashley/leon stories! thanks!
e-mail me when you update please!!! epl1991@aol.com

I am extremly impressed with the way you have worked this story. The sheer craftsmanship in which you have placed this together is astounding. Truly this is one of the best fanfics, and I can't wait until you post the next chapter. *drools in an-ti-ci-pation*

*sobs*
Damn it!
There's gotta be more hiding somewhere!
I love your story, your creation of the little critter that thrived in Leon's head and the way you intertwined everything together as a masterful piece of Renaissance art!
Truly wonderful, plus, I love the kinky side of Leon~!

NO! NO! NO! NO KINKY! LEON!!!!!!!!!! LEON IS SURPOSED TO BE A KICK ASS COP NOT A KINKY SLUT...
o story was good

Saddler = Zim

OMG can't wait to read more!!!!!

OOOOOOOOOOO

you are killlling me MORE PLEASE!!!!!!