rate_review Reviews

Great job! absolutely loved it!

HEY i read your fic...omg it so good i dont know how this would help you but...keep it i read your stories before i sleep XP

Heh, hi Arch. We meet again eh? Didn't take you for the lemon type. Good job as usual, keep up the good work. You know how much I love seeing this pairing.

Well, well, well. This is the first (and only) story that I've ever wanted to review on this site. I personally like it because it depicts a couple "making love", a concept ridiculously rare in the real world. You are also detailed without being detailed, if that makes any since. Congratulations and keep up the good work.

-hb

The quality of the writing, the virtually flawless spelling and grammar, the inspired prose, the tender attention to characterization and the natural flow of the dialogue...shame on you, making the rest of the site nearly pale in comparison. Well done! Not only a refreshing change of pace from content that deals more with tentacles and mindless F-ing, but a great lesson in how sensual and valuable the written word can be. You weren't afraid to be colloquial when you could be, but you went that extra mile in exercising your own eloquence. I'm very impressed. Though it requires a certain mindset, don't be afraid to write another story in the same vein as this one. You have bright talent; use it well!

Hey! It's me who read all your Nash/Sierra fics back on ff.net (Sorry I didn't get to review)! Yup, I read the uncut version not for a bad reason, but to see how well you portray them in fics where there are sex/passionate scenes. I can say you did a great job, and keep up the good work.

L. G.


P. S. - I'm so happy that a kababayan is a really talented writer!

I loved it. I really like the way they transitioned from being totally nonsexual to really getting it on. Great job Arch!

Wow that was great... and you kept the personalities in check too, great job for a first! You should really look into writing more... we could really use your work here xD