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person z32
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omfg.... nice xD
person Hotnspicyfox
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are a sick, vile person to even think of writing something like that. Every detail was dripping with *wrong*, it was disgusting!

I tip my hat to you.

Damn good writing on this, and the twist at the end was good. I have respect for authors who manage to freak me out.
person demyx's_sitar_girl
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Must Admit That Was A Little Weird But Not Gross. To The Person Who Flamed This Story You Were Warned Before Reading This Story You Have No Right To Flame A Well Written Story If You Don't Have Anything Nice To Say Don't Say Anything At All.
person HT
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, finally someone has done a Marluxia/Axel fanfiction! O_O; Of course, the gerbil... well, I won't even go there but.. XD Yay! -coughs- I'll just go and be in my happy little world now..
person HT
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even if it was, of course, part of Marluxia's demented mind. =D But it makes it all the better.
person OMG!!!!
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, THAT WAS JUST FUKING WRONG!!!!!!!! WHO IN THE HELL WOULD FUCK A GERBIL!?!?!?!!?! THAT IS SOOOOOOOOOOO FUCKING SICK!!!!!! YUCK!!!! I ONLY READIN LIKE 2 PARAGRAPHS OF IT AND I WANNA BARF!!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOOO FUCKING SICK!!!!!!! GO WRITE ABOUT, SORA AND RIKU SCREWING EACH OTHER OR SOMETHING, JUST NOOOOOOOOO ANIMAL WATSO EVER!!!!! UGH!!!! DAMN THAT WAS HORRIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUCKING WRONG!!!!!!!
person [tililia]
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very... weird in my tastes, but well written. Good job. Just.. no more gerbils. Please. Just looking at my own gerbil alone freaks the shit outta me.
person does it matter
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was well-written... Although, I didn't care for the concept too much, as I will never look at those cute little furry creatures the same way again.
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn that was bad