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Pretty good fic and a bit strange too. But still very "interesting". Keep it up so we can read the next chapter. Maybe you will like to cross dress Serge for a little more foreplay ^_^. Thanx and please forgive myb english.

OMG, please write more! I want to read about hot CC boy sex and more futa-Kid X CC boy sex! Even if there's no real plot, the backstory you give is just great and nicely detailed. The dialogue between Kid and Serge was just right with the way Serge wouldn't really speak and Kid would say it for him after he spoke in a questioning way(just like in the game at some points), and also the way Kid sounded just as tomboyish, smart-alecky and tough as she's supposed to. The small amount of humor in it was cool too. My two favorite parts are when Kid thinks Serge is gay then finds out he's actually bisexual and calls him a "semi-fag", and also when Serge's shorts fall down in public because Kid had undone them earlier without him noticing. LOL! Seriously now, I'm also glad someone decided finally a write futanari on boy story. There are seriously not enough of them out there. Cheers to you for having the balls to write one! I also can't wait for the yaoi parts in the next chapter, because the only thing as hot as a dickgirl screwing a boy is two boys (or more!) doing each other! I'm a fan of Serge, Nikki, and Korcha so I can't wait to read about them fucking each other, but I agree with that other reviewer that it would be nice to see Glenn get in on the action too, or at least get some sorta action. It's your fic though, so you don't have to if you don't want to. Anyhoo, here's from a girl who's loving your story and looking forward to the next update! C Yaa!

Finally, someone who has the guts to write Futanari(dickgirl)/Male action! Good on you!
Thus far, the story is very nice, forget that it's a PWP. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter, especially seeing as it's featuring the two characters which, in my opinion, were the conceptors' concession to fan-service male-eye-candy. As well as the scene when Serge gets his original body back.
_What we're trying to say is: A) They finally decided to recognize the fact that there were also female players, and that they would also enjoy the wonders of fan-service, B) Keep up the good work, you got us bouncing on the edges of our seats!_
Are you aware that that last was dripping sexual innuendo?
_It was done on purpose._
Right. Anyway, looking forward to the next installment!

Good so far keep it up! It's interesting that Kid is a herm o_o;;;;;

In your next story could you have Glenn in..any fashion or form?