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April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
An excellent read, but might I suggest spacing your paragraphs out next time? The blocky format made reading a bit arduous.
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, hotness! I liked this very much. Onto chapter 2!
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good ending. I enjoyed this very much.
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It doesn't even matter that this story doesn't have a plot to me, because its so well written. This is definitely a new favorite of mine. I feel sorry for Serge though, because he wouldn't be able to sit down for weeks if this happened to him. lol. Also, I wouldn't mind seeing more Glenn/Steena, but you can choose whether or not to write a fic on them. Awesome fic!
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Simply wonderful! Shame that this particular story will be stopping there... ::Le Sigh::
_Oi! Obsessed much, are we?_
Like I said concerning the previous chapter: Fan Service is a wonderful thing, even ifÑor perhaps especiallyÑwhen it is provided by an unofficial distributor.
_This a review for a PWP story, and you are trying to make an impression with your flowery speech?_
Um, yes this might be not *quite* the place for this. Sorry for rambling.
Anyway, I loved the threesome-cum-foursome (no pun intended. _Or maybe it is_), though the Glenn/Steena scene seems a bit 'pasted on' as a last minute addition...
At any rate, I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of your works!
_Oi! Obsessed much, are we?_
Like I said concerning the previous chapter: Fan Service is a wonderful thing, even ifÑor perhaps especiallyÑwhen it is provided by an unofficial distributor.
_This a review for a PWP story, and you are trying to make an impression with your flowery speech?_
Um, yes this might be not *quite* the place for this. Sorry for rambling.
Anyway, I loved the threesome-cum-foursome (no pun intended. _Or maybe it is_), though the Glenn/Steena scene seems a bit 'pasted on' as a last minute addition...
At any rate, I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of your works!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! I was just going to read this story again and I find that you updated it! Great! I loved all the action between the boys and the stuff when Kid joined in too. Also, that part when you described how Serge felt all confused about his attraction to other boys was so cuute! :) The small bit of Glenny and Steena at the end was cool too! I really hope you do more Chrono Cross stories, but I'm looking forward to the ones you described at the end too! A+ lemon!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is proof that there is nothing hotter than a cute anime style boy gettin poked in his butt by a cute anime style dickgirl. Well, except for when 2 or more cute anime boys get it on with each other! It also makes it cuter when its just boys. Mmmmmmmmmm, adorable yaoi goodness! :) I can't wait for the next chapter just because it seems it will have my 3 fav boy characters from Chrono Cross too. I hope this story is updated soon, it's awesome!
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! please write another chapter.
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Very hot stuff. I like. Please, I want more of this story!
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, please make more.