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for Komali and Aryll

by Rylasasin

person rylasasin
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In response to Blah:

I've heard several complaints about that on fanfiction.net. Unlike my other story, this was never meant to be a continuous story, it was meant to be a oneshotted komaryll lemon. so yeah.
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love KomArylls too...actually, anything with Ayrll in it is great to me =D.

Great job on this one!
person Blah
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice...good job But you seem to take things a little fast for the charecters you shouldn't rush to the sex part so fast. Other then that its pretty good nice job.
person ^-authors response
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey thanks for the reveiw!

I'll try to write more komarylls... as soon as I come up with more ideas. lol.
person D.e.a
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story. I read it on your Medlink Foundation site. KomaliAryll is now one of my favouirte couples. ^___^ I think you should add more to this story...if you want to, of course.