rate_review Reviews

Me like this story. You did a very good job. Made a yummy story very yummy. Oh and please don't hurt precious Riku!

^^ I liked it a lot! Please write more.

Instantaneously, big word. good job.

--Tililia

Noooooo!!!! Don't hurt Riku!!!! Sorry, you can't steal Riku...I have already stolen him (insert evil laugh here). If you've never actually played the game...then you are a sick, sick little bastard...Just kidding! If you really haven't played the game then I recommend that you do. It was one of the first videogames that I ever really thought of a 'genius'. Your story is very very very very very very good!!!! I mean really, one sexy bishounen, one innocent and adorable virgin, having extremely hot sex...Who in their right mind would ever complain! The gremmar was exellent but do try to ad more detail to the surroundings...I'm soooo sorry...I guess I'm being critical. I beg your forgivness *grovels*!!!! Well, keep writing. I can't really tell how you're going to continue this or if you're even going to...All I know is, is that you are a great writer and have a wonderful (yet still perverted) mind.

~ The Wings Of Darkness

damn that was hott! awesome work i loved it! great F%@^in job! damn there hott together!
keep it up!