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for Begging Virgin

by Vzlashiryu

schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my... wow, that's probably the best lemon I've read in a while! Keep it up ^__^
person Valerie
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So hot, so sweet...and dripping with sappiness and sweat and all that other naughty stuff that makes me say: I love your fic'. It's now one of my personal top ten in adultfanfiction.net. Brava! You've made me fall in love with Sora all over again.
person FLyin\' Aoi
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
......Wow!!!~ I loved it!!!! That was awesome!!! You should enter that in a yaoi contest or somethin'!!!! That was hot!!!! ^-^
person Alleigna
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMI BEAUTIFUL STORY!!! You did an EXCELLENT job on the story!! i absolutely LOVE the way it was written. Keep up the wonderful work!!
person Sam
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good! I couldn't stop from drooling*whips drool from mouth*. I enjoyed the story. I hope that you write more yaoi fanfics. ^_____^
person zenraver
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
intresting...very intresting. could have been longer, but, you take what you can get. and what we got was goooood
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O wow.... hot... *drool*... i liked it. it had a lot of meaning to it. awesome!
person Michelle
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“Inside of you… where it’s very warm and tight and dark and soft, let me worship you Sora, my dear.” Wow... that's just about the hottest line I've heard in a lemon to date. *fans self* You must continue, you have a huge knack for being able to write romantic smut well. Be proud, queen lemon writer. ^___^ Continue or I shall spork thee. XD
person armpit
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw! ~_~ HOT!
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i need some time alone in the ...bathroom now... heheh.
person anthony keiser
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i like the story alot im just now for the first time playing kingdom hearts and i noticed that riku and sora fight alot with each other guess they like eachother alot for as much as they fight i wonder what would happen if tidus got into the mix