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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I think I understand Dante quite well. Who wouldn't desire a man such as Vergil?
As usual with your works, I love the way you portray the characters' emotional side. And I especially like this fic because it was Dante lost in thought (should I add, "desire"?) about Vergil. Hey, love that line: "at least he knew he'd look well with long hair". I can't remember the exact words, but... Funny line, indeed, heh, heh.
Well, the ending came sort of abruptly for me. In comparison to the first chapter, I mean: I really like long chapters to read, but just as you say, the story was about the final scene of the fic - and it was quite enjoyable, may I add. I encourage you to write an epilogue for this story, or to write just as many stories as you'd like to. If Dante and Vergil are on it, and you're writing them - be sure I'll be reading and enjoying them.
See you.
As usual with your works, I love the way you portray the characters' emotional side. And I especially like this fic because it was Dante lost in thought (should I add, "desire"?) about Vergil. Hey, love that line: "at least he knew he'd look well with long hair". I can't remember the exact words, but... Funny line, indeed, heh, heh.
Well, the ending came sort of abruptly for me. In comparison to the first chapter, I mean: I really like long chapters to read, but just as you say, the story was about the final scene of the fic - and it was quite enjoyable, may I add. I encourage you to write an epilogue for this story, or to write just as many stories as you'd like to. If Dante and Vergil are on it, and you're writing them - be sure I'll be reading and enjoying them.
See you.
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! *claps* I'm happy!
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* Ha-haw-t-t....*She can't even say it correctly do to all the drool* Um, ew*Wipes drool* Anyway... Epilougue! Epilougue! Write one, please! I adore Vergil/Dante, and for some reason, it's the only thing I can say five times fast. XD
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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god...that was so hot I'm dizzy! Seriously, my vision is blrring from the...asdfghj where is my Dante?? ;___;
That was an amazing fic. I can't even tell you what I'm feeling after reading it XD Maybe I'll get my girlfriend to elaborate, though I doubt either of us could come up with anything more than "asdfghj @_____@" XDD
Wonderfully written, and I loved the leadup. One of my favorite DMC fics so far. ^^ Keep writing~!
That was an amazing fic. I can't even tell you what I'm feeling after reading it XD Maybe I'll get my girlfriend to elaborate, though I doubt either of us could come up with anything more than "asdfghj @_____@" XDD
Wonderfully written, and I loved the leadup. One of my favorite DMC fics so far. ^^ Keep writing~!
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is amazing. I love it.
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! *drools a river* So ha-awt~!*fans self do the hottness that is Dante and Virgil* Please, PLEASE right an epilogue to this!
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wanted to drop a fast note to say THANK YOU for writing this story! There isn't nearly enough Dante/Vergil fic, and this one so well-written, to boot! Well. An Epilogue would be grand if you felt like writing it. XD
I really liked the way you portrayed the characters. I think this would actually make a neat series if you ever felt like doing case-fics. So anyway- kudos to you! Ta.
I really liked the way you portrayed the characters. I think this would actually make a neat series if you ever felt like doing case-fics. So anyway- kudos to you! Ta.
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
epilouge, what? *long purrrrrrrrrr.* descriptive smex is good- very good; you have no need to apologise believe meh. keep writin', 'cause damn yer good at it. <3
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! marathon fucking. epiloge...hm. tough call. I like it how it is, but on the other hand, it might be nice to see what breakfast w/ Trish would be like. *picturing: "ew. you guys smell wierd." "Shower's broke." "Ew. go outside. at least its raining..."* haha. random side note: whoever said cum tastes good was a whackjob. woot. THANKS for updating!!!
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would DEFINATELY not mind if you wrote a epilogue, I loved this story is was so hot! And the twins make a marvelous couple, I love the way they were put together, and in this case I don't mind that there wasn't much of a plot to the second chapter, it was beautifully delicious the way it was. You write suberbly!
~Seeker
PS Write more! or Write another one!
~Seeker
PS Write more! or Write another one!