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by Kaligoddess

person Lorilei
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought this story was awesome, although, I for one, do not like Frost. I crated a character a lot like her, long before she was even in production, and now everyone thinks I'M the copycat. But personal grudges aside, this story was awesome. I love Sub-Zero and think there should be more stories with him. I might even write my own. XD
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kortal Mombat
person Red
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Thumbs up! Good choice of couple!
person Ehlonna Bloodstorm
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if reviewed before...but damn! That was friggin hot! What we need is more Frost/Subzero pairings as good as that one!
person Ehlonna Bloodstorm
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay wait, he's not really that old. The process of mastering that ice medallion that Frost tried to steal from him aged his appearance. Besides Anna Nicole didn't have a problem (even if she was just a gold digger)
person Exodus
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Well a nice match up of characters but i really dont like the 1 chapter sex thing its ok though....2/5 for matching frost and sub.
person Jennifer
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always thought Subby and Frost made a good couple, even though he's old.
person at a loss
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...ick

He's old enough to be her...ew...
person Amychan
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOOT! That was hot! Lol, you have made my day! I was just playing MK earlier, actually, and discovered Sub-Zero died in the end! *Sobs dramatically.* I desperately needed a pickup so thanks for writing this! Your story is awesome and I shamelessly encourage you to write more...because you can't go wrong with big, muscular men running around in tight ninja outfits. ^-^

Besides, I for one think your story has a plot. I mean, if shameless sex isn't a plot, then Hollywood would be broke and Hollywood is by no means broke. So hooray for sex plots.

Have a good one, I shall now go and worship your story's Sub-Zero awesomeness. ;)