rate_review Reviews

OH WOW THAT WAS GREAT! AND ON MY BIRTHDAY TOOO! Yep today is my birthday which I know you didn't know that so nm.

And I'm back! And just finished reading this story again. Pfft I'm sad. But still amazingly satisfied.

One question: What's a chigger? 0_O

ummm I would say slit Riku's throat, but then there wouldn't be any reason for me to kidnap him. >_<

Anyway I like the first chapter. The R/S scene had me thinking there was gonna be some good stuff early on, but i loved how you just stopped it and changed the mood quickly and seamlessly.

Keep up the good work.

NOW ON WITH THE CARNAGES!!!

I am in love with this story... I can't believe that so many chapters were posted! I was all "WOW!" And just had to read them. I can't wait for the next update! Update soon!

mmm. i can't wait for the next chapter! this is great stuff. keep up the good work.

I've been reading this fic for most of the day, and you have seriously got me hooked! If this was a book I probably wouldn't be able to put it down. I love how you've put the characters in an alternate universe, but kept them as themselves. It's very well done.

I'll definately be checking regulary to see if you've updated or not. Very very good work.

^_^

I was just wondering if you have decided on which pairing you are going to make this-Riku/Sora or Squall/Sora. I think it will probably end up Squall/Sora but if not feel free to let us know in an authors note or such-I know I'm waiting eagerly for the final pairing of this(and if there is going to be character death because of one of those pairings...wow, that was a dark thought even for me). Welll, I hope you don't keep us waiting as long as before but I understand with good stories such as these you really have to write when inspiration strikes and not put crap out just because you haven't upated in 3weeks. I hope you find inspiration for this, and your other story-City of Dying Dreams-easily. Goodluck.

More people need to review this fucking story! I mean come on people!! all those hits and only 27 reviews are you guys crazy! Reviews is the life's blood of alot of authors and alot of times they will not continue writing unless there's some love around here! Oh yeah the story rocks my socks by the way it's fucking awesome and amazing and a bag of doritos.. yeah alright Review suckers!!!

Oh my god Can I just tell you how much I love this story!? let me count th ways.... The Grammer.. I literally only counted one spelling mistake out of the whole 13 chapters.. and damned if I could remember what it was. The characterizations.. I think the ooc elements are well in place due to the fantastical situations you put them in.. I mean how can you compare how Riku acts in Kingdom Hearts to facing a crazed ex lover ? I don't think you can! Anyway.. I think the characterizations are on point especially Squall.. I love his angsty longing for Sora.. But who can blame him right? Sora's just too darn cute! Um okay moving on.. And you know what? this story's too perfect for me to go disecting it and things so I'll just wrap this up by just saying this is one of the best Kingdom Hearts stories I've ever read.. and most of the time I'm not really in favor for A/U storylines unless their written well... as your story is undeniably written beautifully I cannot say anything more other than just keep on doing what your doing and I'm eagerly awaiting an update

A lovely peice of ficcy

Neko's Rate: 5 stars!

(No go rate... before I get Irate.... okay that was lame...)

holy shit... what a thing to do... way to go riku u jsut dug your own grave!! shit... plz tell me this 'relationship' is over? sora and squall make a so much better couple!! for one thing he isn't pressing sora to sleep wiht him!! my gods... i'm glad u updated but damn... *cuddles sora* i hope thinks work out for u in the end...