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OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Please right more! Cause it's a Really well written story. Orignally I started reading it and then suddenly saw the "Character death" thing and was like AHHHHHHH, but it was just that Jake guy so I don't feel as bad as if Sora or Riku or Squall. Anyways plaese write more. If you don't I might be forced to do something horrible, like HOMEWORK! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

heh. So much for the well-cared-for leather couch. It's definitely a mess now.... but this is still the greatest chapter! So congrats to you!! please update soon! that couch MUST be cleaned! lmao

Woo! Hot hot hot! I feel so bad for Sora having to see what he did back there, but that didnt' stop me from loving the image of him with 'Leon'. Now that the little yaoi demon in my head is soothed I can't wait to see how the rest of the story is going to progress. Sephiroth is going to hit the roof.

Wow. It's been a long time since I've been able to enjoy a fic instead of using it to scrutinize my own writing flaws. That was very very well done. This may not sound like a compliment but I'll say it anyway because to me it's important: There were a lot of flaws in the flow and grammar but apart from simply noticing them, they didn't wrck the story for me one bit. That is a big accomplishment since I usually can't stand to read something that isn't perfectly written and edited.

It's going to be hell waiting for the next chapter. If you're in the practise of emailing for updates, please add me to the list at Krystal_Epyon@yahoo.com and if not, I'll just have to check back every day.

Congrats on a brilliant fic and keep up the awesome work!

Awesome, awesome, awesome! This is great. I'm swept away by this plot and the characters. It's so deep and I gets the best of me. I'll find myself smiling at the screen or laughing or glaring or shocked and surprised. It brings so many reactions out of me, and you should be proud to get such feelings from the readers. You have a few minors typos, but not many. Thank your beta, or your spellcheck. You do add your commas in all the wrong places though. I'll love your way with words. Oh, and the cussing is admirable; I bet your family would approve, huh? /sarcasm/ I'm disappointed in the lemon though. There should have definitely been pain for Sora. He is (or was, rather) a virgin, and there should have been some tearing. The murder scene with Jack (or whatever his name was) was definitely a surprise. I liked that trick. I was thinking that he was going to drug Riku and screw him like a rabbit. Then--Sora was knock on the door and find them in the middle of their rendezvous. Sora would get upset, and run off to Squall, but I like this much better. I don't like stories that are so predictable. Another thing I'm disappointed in is the fact there's no more chapters to read. /laughter/ This is great. If this is at fanfiction.net, I'd love to see the family-oriented version, and I'm definitely adding it to my favorites. I commend you on your marvelous writing style and the amazing story. Well done.

Yay! We finally get a Sora/Squall lemon! This chapter was great. I can't wait to see what happens the next day when Sora has to face everyone about the events of the party. I also want to see how Sora deals with Riku now that he's slept with Squall. I remember at the end of this chapter Squall bit Sora on the shoulder. Will Riku see the bite mark and find out something's up? Please update soon!

I love this story to tears!! Ack which i almost shed! Poor Sora!! Chp 7 was really deep and it got me to thinkin about alot of things, chp 8 was just absolutley awesdome!! Please update soon! Imma rootin' for Sora and Riku but what just happened with Sora and Squall is no doubt gonna cause a lot of drama that i can't wait to read! Keep up the great work!!

^_^ This is great! I want to see more of your updates soon to read! Keep it up and great job on your fic!

erm, i just told you happy birthday on the family website, so... i tell you again. happy birthday. you know, birthdays are happening often on this day, and this month T_T awkward... people must've gotten busy in june...

i also say a happy birthday salute for the hell of it to joie, melissa, jaleesah, precious, genevieve, laura, matt, joe, jenela, among others born in this month, etc. etc... right then.

ja ne.

I love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu. Thank you so much for updating. It's been my most anticipated update, and it sure as hell wasn't disappointing! I was actually cheering. Is that wrong? Nah. Squall/Sora could never be wrong. I betcha the noncon is gonna be Riku/Sora after recent events. *cough* Unless Jake comes back from the dead. Scary thought. My day was crap X10 until I read this. Now I can be happy as I sleep. Yay.