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May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i love this story and would love for you to finish it or at least add a new chapter! I've been reading this story for three years and I still love it! =)
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May 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17
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You said you were gonna finish this!!!!! I thought, cool, seventeen chapters, its really well written so far, and at the end of every other chapter, she's all - "I'll finish this!" BUT ITS SO OLD!!!! GET BACK HERE AND FINISH THIS BEFORE IT FINISHES ME!!!!
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You said you were gonna finish this!!!!! I thought, cool, seventeen chapters, its really well written so far, and at the end of every other chapter, she's all - "I'll finish this!" BUT ITS SO OLD!!!! GET BACK HERE AND FINISH THIS BEFORE IT FINISHES ME!!!!
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May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Um.. Not a happy ending? Oh no, do I even dare to read this ^^' Well, first chapter seemed interesting so I guess I will try it anyway. Onwards!
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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude,
I read the story all over again and I still consider this one of the most well written Squall/Sora stories I've ever read. It was this story that converted me to like Squall/Sora.
So, please keep going! I wanna know what happens in the end, whether it's sad or happy. This is one of the most realistic fanfics I've ever read as well.
so yeah, thank you for writing this! Re-reading it totally makes up my day!
I read the story all over again and I still consider this one of the most well written Squall/Sora stories I've ever read. It was this story that converted me to like Squall/Sora.
So, please keep going! I wanna know what happens in the end, whether it's sad or happy. This is one of the most realistic fanfics I've ever read as well.
so yeah, thank you for writing this! Re-reading it totally makes up my day!
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear SephirothsStalker,
I've been watching this story for... years now. I've resisted signing
up just to review, but I can't stand it anymore! I must compliment you.
I love this story. I keep waiting for the next chapter, but the world
keeps you so busy I have to wait for forever! Damn world. -^^-
Anyways, the love triangle between Riku, Sora, and Squall (Leon) is an
idea I have never seen anywhere but you. I love it.The story is so interesting
that my girl friend and I were reading the story together, at the same time,
just wondering what was going to happen next. *Laughs* It's true. By the way,
your scenes with Squall and Sora are HOT! I've read this story over and over
again, like a book.
It's interesting how you portray all of the characters, especially Riku and Kairi.
I love how you didn't make Kairi a character to just to be gotten rid of, and I love
how Riku is... himself. You really keep to the characters, even in OOC moments. Or
more it's that you capture the essence of them. Tidus and Wakka are just adorable!
I love Tidus and Riku's relationship verses Wakka and Sora's relationship. The dynamics
of the story is splended!
These last two chapters have been so interesting. You've been given an opportunity to
dig into the "real people" of these characters and you haven't disappointed. I keep thinking
that Sora and Squall are going to get caught. It's so exciting. I also keep thinking that Riku
is going to be the one to find them. Then I start thinking, "well... if that doesn't happen..."
and my thoughts start wandering.
I think, with all this focus on Sora and Squall, you should spend a chapter on Riku. It would be
interesting that with the loss of attention from Sora he start cutting or doing drugs or something
dramatic like that. Just a suggestion for another plot twist. But I definately would like to see a
chapter on poor Riku. I would be interested in what you might find as the way Riku would "deal"
with his sorrows/blame. PLEASE WMS (WriteMoreSoon)!!!
-.~La-Reina Ahoui =[^.^]=
Ja Matta!
I've been watching this story for... years now. I've resisted signing
up just to review, but I can't stand it anymore! I must compliment you.
I love this story. I keep waiting for the next chapter, but the world
keeps you so busy I have to wait for forever! Damn world. -^^-
Anyways, the love triangle between Riku, Sora, and Squall (Leon) is an
idea I have never seen anywhere but you. I love it.The story is so interesting
that my girl friend and I were reading the story together, at the same time,
just wondering what was going to happen next. *Laughs* It's true. By the way,
your scenes with Squall and Sora are HOT! I've read this story over and over
again, like a book.
It's interesting how you portray all of the characters, especially Riku and Kairi.
I love how you didn't make Kairi a character to just to be gotten rid of, and I love
how Riku is... himself. You really keep to the characters, even in OOC moments. Or
more it's that you capture the essence of them. Tidus and Wakka are just adorable!
I love Tidus and Riku's relationship verses Wakka and Sora's relationship. The dynamics
of the story is splended!
These last two chapters have been so interesting. You've been given an opportunity to
dig into the "real people" of these characters and you haven't disappointed. I keep thinking
that Sora and Squall are going to get caught. It's so exciting. I also keep thinking that Riku
is going to be the one to find them. Then I start thinking, "well... if that doesn't happen..."
and my thoughts start wandering.
I think, with all this focus on Sora and Squall, you should spend a chapter on Riku. It would be
interesting that with the loss of attention from Sora he start cutting or doing drugs or something
dramatic like that. Just a suggestion for another plot twist. But I definately would like to see a
chapter on poor Riku. I would be interested in what you might find as the way Riku would "deal"
with his sorrows/blame. PLEASE WMS (WriteMoreSoon)!!!
-.~La-Reina Ahoui =[^.^]=
Ja Matta!
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looking through all those reviews I discovered something. I did review once before... TWO YEARS AGO! Wow... Your people love you.
The next time you update I think you should put up two chapters. I know, but just wait until you have two and update It feels better
on us fans.
There also seems to be a mix of Sq/Sora and Rik/Sora fans. No wonder you can't decide! I hope you don't have EVERYthing planned out.
I look forward to more twists.
Much Love,
-.~ La-Reina Ahoui
The next time you update I think you should put up two chapters. I know, but just wait until you have two and update It feels better
on us fans.
There also seems to be a mix of Sq/Sora and Rik/Sora fans. No wonder you can't decide! I hope you don't have EVERYthing planned out.
I look forward to more twists.
Much Love,
-.~ La-Reina Ahoui
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17
... If you don't update this, I WILL DIE.
I've been steadily making my way through the pages of AFF, wading through snowdrifts of shit and digging through piles of one-shots and bad writing, only to find this absolute gem nestled in the midst of it, and thought, "Oh. At seventeen chapters, and having not been updated in a while, it's sure to be complete."
Not only have you made a complete Sora/Squall shipper out of me, YOU HAVE ADDICTED ME TO YOUR FANFICTION. I'm going to send this off and find out if you've written anything else, because I MUST HAVE MORE.
Also, if you have/had/will have an update mailing list, I can be reached at bombayesper@aim.com via email, or on lj at schuldige_katze. YOU MUST INFORM ME WHEN YOU UPDATE.
And you must update soon. Without more Sora/Squall/Riku drama/angst/love I WILL EXPIRE A SAD, LONELY LITTLE KITTY.
... If you don't update this, I WILL DIE.
I've been steadily making my way through the pages of AFF, wading through snowdrifts of shit and digging through piles of one-shots and bad writing, only to find this absolute gem nestled in the midst of it, and thought, "Oh. At seventeen chapters, and having not been updated in a while, it's sure to be complete."
Not only have you made a complete Sora/Squall shipper out of me, YOU HAVE ADDICTED ME TO YOUR FANFICTION. I'm going to send this off and find out if you've written anything else, because I MUST HAVE MORE.
Also, if you have/had/will have an update mailing list, I can be reached at bombayesper@aim.com via email, or on lj at schuldige_katze. YOU MUST INFORM ME WHEN YOU UPDATE.
And you must update soon. Without more Sora/Squall/Riku drama/angst/love I WILL EXPIRE A SAD, LONELY LITTLE KITTY.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why haven't you updated!! TTnTT
Before I wouldn't allow myself to do this, but since I've just put up a chapter, I feel like I can yell at others.
I've been reading this since some un-rememberable amount of time ago and it's been stuck on this chapter for antoher un-rememberable amount of time! But it's been too long, that much I know for sure. So until you update, I'm going to just have to re-read all the lovely angst and tension and sex.
Other than all of that rambling, this story is amazing. You've done a really great job with it and I've cried and my heart has ached and I've just felt so many emotions with this story that it isn't even funny. So keep up the great job and don't stop writing!
Before I wouldn't allow myself to do this, but since I've just put up a chapter, I feel like I can yell at others.
I've been reading this since some un-rememberable amount of time ago and it's been stuck on this chapter for antoher un-rememberable amount of time! But it's been too long, that much I know for sure. So until you update, I'm going to just have to re-read all the lovely angst and tension and sex.
Other than all of that rambling, this story is amazing. You've done a really great job with it and I've cried and my heart has ached and I've just felt so many emotions with this story that it isn't even funny. So keep up the great job and don't stop writing!
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read all 17 chapters........... and I really, really, really love it! I got to say this is the best Kingdom Hearts fanfic that I've ever read! Especially since my favorite pairing is Squall/Sora! I've also noticed that there are no grammar and vocabulary problems, which I give two thumbs up, because all the other fanfics that do have a good storyline and plot don't have good grammar and/or vocabulary. Please continue to write this story! I will definitely be waiting for the next chapter that you write!
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September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi,
just wanted to leave a review for such an awesome story! I stayed up till about 3 this morning reading through the entire thing. honestly, this is some of the best writing I've read in this fandom. Just... amazing. You really have a skill for building characters, but not ending up sounding repetitive, and Squall's struggle with his sex drive... gah. delicious and profound.
anyway, enough of my rambling. what I really wanted to say is, thanks for taking time out of your life to write and post! I'm sure lots of people, including me, appreciate it a lot.
And where is the next chapter?!
-pokey
just wanted to leave a review for such an awesome story! I stayed up till about 3 this morning reading through the entire thing. honestly, this is some of the best writing I've read in this fandom. Just... amazing. You really have a skill for building characters, but not ending up sounding repetitive, and Squall's struggle with his sex drive... gah. delicious and profound.
anyway, enough of my rambling. what I really wanted to say is, thanks for taking time out of your life to write and post! I'm sure lots of people, including me, appreciate it a lot.
And where is the next chapter?!
-pokey