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December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say, this was pretty lame. I mean, havn't you ever heard of punctuation marks? The actual sex scene wasn't very good either. No build up, no real climax, just plain boring.
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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea, but it seemed out of order and it left me very confused.
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmm....
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks. This is the most shittiest fic writen, and it was a waste of time. Good job. Now don't attempt to write anymore, you hear me?!
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you on drugs? was your mother on drugs? becasue if that's not the case, then you are the worst writer. ever.