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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Could use some seperation and a lot more detail. Good general idea though. Just try to clean it up.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'You Teats Pretty good
Four Some Is who is
Eleven'
Teats?!
It's a good idea, but the writing was plain bad.
Four Some Is who is
Eleven'
Teats?!
It's a good idea, but the writing was plain bad.
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF is this shit? Are you on crack? Learn some fuckin' english man! Ever hear of grammar? This is the most shitty piece of writing I ever read! Why did I even read it? Please don't write anything anymore! Please! Your fuckin' writing is too fuckin' stupid to look at! Please delete the fuckin' piece of writing. And don't take so muck crack next time!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chrisxhelenxthat one other girl (the red head)
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't make me beat you in the name of grammer...
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey there!!! I'm going to give you the name of a key on your keyboard that will change your life!!! It is called..... (drum roll) the F7 button!!!
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Learn some English. Seriously, this was horrible. &the plot was rushed.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sucks beyond belief
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
?????
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this ranks together with Mortal Kombat's Fire and Ice and that Wolverine x Storm atrocity in the X-Men section for simply being one of the worst fan fictions I have ever read...
...And that's saying an awful lot.
...And that's saying an awful lot.