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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! How can u call this a pointless no character development one shot?! This is one of the best one-shots I've ever read, and u had so much Riku and Sora character development that it is not even funny! I love the circumstances u put them in and Riku and Sora seemed very in character! I love your fic and I'm so happy you're writing more to it! You could find some plot twists if u wanted to, or u could add characters to make the story develop so keep going with this! It was awesome and I hope to see more in the future! Ja ne!
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh wow! that was yummy! *reads it over again* very well written. Loved sora's pervertedness! very cute! glad that you're thinking about adding extra parts to this cause i was going to suggest that you do so. i definitely want to read more about how the rest of the weekend went. Smut Fest 2004. LOL! sounds like fun! please update soon!
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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can I have a smut fest 2004 t-shirt? :P Honestly, this story was great. I've been itching for a good Yaoi fix to help me break through my writers block. I think this may have done the trick. Great job! I look forward to reading the rest of it..
"Come on Barbie, let's go party.." :D
"Come on Barbie, let's go party.." :D