rate_review Reviews

There should be and another chapter.

Why am I only reading this now?! This is the first Jak/Daxter story I've ever read, but it won't be the last!
How could I have missed the chemistry between them?
Damn, I need a swim!

Hot story and I love your style! Not many stories for Human Daxter/Jak, but this one is hot. Nice job.

So hot! So incredibly well described, I think that I need a swim after reading. I love the way you just had them go crazy the second they knew she was out of earshot. Although, I would have liked to see something more of repurcussions or dealing with it afterwards, but the mood of the entire piece might not really have allowed it.
Good descriptive text with a nice sort of timing to the whole piece. The illicit pleasure of sneaking in to steal something, followed by - well, the 'illicit' cupboard incident. Lots of buildup in different ways.

- and a cupboard! Ow! Crampy! Trust me, I knows what I speak of!
So very good. Thanka you!

Sry! No name on last review. My bad!

*wimper* i keep wating and waiting but i must finally demand that you make a sequel! please? pretty please? with cherries on top?

*cackles* Oh hell... I loved this one too. You're turning me into a Jak and Daxter perv. *grins*

Mmm... More? I wouldn't mind reading another chapter of this. Yummy.

Ahh... the excitement of almost getting caught! Love the story!

That was... one of the hottest Jak and Daxter stories I've ever read. GOD it was good! I'm gonna have the mental image of Daxter whimpering while Jak is rocking against him, trying to get himself off stuck in my head all night!