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for Incalescence

by Jemisard

schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh... oh, wow... oh, that was nice... Great, you've single-handedly turned me into a Jak/Daxter fangirl. Poor, vulnerable little Dax... heheh, don't worry, Jak will take *good* care of you. Loved it!
person skittles
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ho-lee-shit! that was hot.
person jaygoose
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! That was fucking amazing. *giggles like a fangirl* It was soooo beautiful and ranchy and sweaty and marvelous. *sigh* I need a cold shower now, thank you very much. *grins* I love these boys together I truly do. I have to write more like this Jemis... you have to.
person ZombieDuke
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy. Fucking. Hell.
I'm gonna pray now, pray that you write a full Jak and Daxter fuckin' scene because the pervious ones I've read, god, I can't even describe it! This one, I don't know the words to say, the only words I know is that it was hot, heavy and I ache because I just want to see Jak finally shred that last ounce of control and shag poor Daxter silly. Excellent writing, delicious characters and absoultly wonderful everything.
Please, please update!
(add this to my favourites as I write)
person Anon
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Og my gods....more!*offers you vast amounts of worship and candies of your choosing.* Not enough Jak/Dax shippers out there. I would love to see a second chapter or a sequal or just another jak/dax story....hehehehe....*grin*