AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Public

by Musashden

person Ookamiluv
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! Another one !
It was just as good as the first one!
Can't wait to read many others from you!
Encore! Bravo!
Yeahha!
Seeya!
_ Ookami!
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!! I loved that! It was great. Public fucking and pissed off Krimson Guards. The best. In the game I always hide under bridges. It works so well. Lol!! On to three!!

-Black
person Yami-Hikari
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sex and Humour, just what I love. ^_^
person Siarra
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot, baby, hot!

This had even more of that wonderful, mischievous naughtiness than "Heat". There were a few misspellings, for example it took me a while to realize that you meant the bazaar when it said "bizarre".
But the idea was simply exciting and the yumminess was, well, yummy.
person SpiritFighter
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! There needs to be more Jak and Torn smut! I love this fic so much (Heat too). Thankyou VERY much for writing it!
person sole
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol holy crap, that was great. I can't wait to read more of your work!!!!!
person dragon child23
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey great job!