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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww... that was insanely sweet! I never really thought about Jak & Daxter as more than a fun game that my little brothers play, but this was really great! I liked the part where Dax's heart was pounding like a scared little ottsel :) Too cute. I really enjoyed this, so of course now I have to go read the others... Great job!
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh-em-gee, dude, I feel like an unwitting stalker!
Haha!
I just came here to read more J&D fics, and I clicked your name so I could read your stories in the right order, and I clicked this one, and it was the one I read earlier~!
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I'm gonna read your other fics now.
Toodles!!
Haha!
I just came here to read more J&D fics, and I clicked your name so I could read your stories in the right order, and I clicked this one, and it was the one I read earlier~!
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I'm gonna read your other fics now.
Toodles!!
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY IM REVIEWING o_o You conniving, manipulating woman~! .. Who knows just how to deal with slackers like myself... -_-; *COUGHS* Anyways~! IM HERE AND READY TO LEER. *giggles INSANELY* You KNOW I adore this too much for feasible WORDS, love! I appreciate you so much, because you actually have the backbone to write JnD smut, whilst I need a LEETTLE more training, and thus you are the ONLY source of that sexy gewdness that is JxD. But if there were 330473 others, Im sure you'd still be the best :3 *HUGS* BUT ANYWAYS! I think I've reviewed the two that came before this... So on with the show!
I ADORED the analogy between Jak and a rock XD but a comfy rock, yknow? It gave such a physical touch/telling sensation to it, t'was so sweet, and such a comparison as Dax would make! Just their silenty-lovey-comfortable interactions and snuggies and shiznit are so ADORABLE ;o; I like the silent touch you add to Jak. He never speaks unless he has to, and it really reflects the old Jak that Dax used to know. (shoot, I realize Im so just quoting the damn fic as I read more XD YOU KNOW THAT I UNDERSTAND IT.)
BWAHAHA. Jak is so gentle, and Daxter's such a cocky, expectant little thing! But at the same time, you made him adorably reluctant to say something mooshy, while the line made me melt XP You can tell he's so new to this~! *SQUEALS* And the kissu MADE ME SO HAPPEH. Just the way you write them, it makes it seem so cuddly, warm, close, all of it! And the idea of Dax snatching kisses in front of people (suuuuch as Keira) to 'make his claim'... XD *giggles* he's so possessive like that.
And at the same time, whilst I LOVE the fluff, I also have a real bit of a fetish with super!dominating/darkish Jak. And YES woman, FEEEEEED my addiciton. FEED EET. *drools* The whole thing, with the finger and the final demanding kiss and the... AND THE... I dunno XD The unsuspectingness of Dax gets me too~! How Jak keeps his silence, but in such a different way that it unnerves him. AND ITS SO DAMN SEXY WHEN HE FINALLY GIVES EEN. XD
Just... haaah. <3 JUST MM. There's always so much mindless passion, no muchu time for talking cos its all so damn all-consuming... Especially with Dax and his little domi!fetish! XD BUT AARRRGH. *melts, just MELTS* Im su excitedish XP *SWEATDROP* Just the way you describe it gets me into fits. FITSSSS. The lag before Jak grabbed Dax into his lap was just like *EYES GO BOOM* ;o; But... RRGH! I wanted more, why doesnt Dax!? WHAAAI?! I cant see him truly refusing Jak, but you pulled it off well and left me very frusterated XD GRRR. GRR, JEMI. I love how awkward it was when they quit, the mutual lust still very much there, but how Jak fixed it all with his immeasurable sweetness ^_^ YES. COLD SHOWER. ( I SO had to ask my friend what that meant.)
Uh, anyways.. *SWEATDROP* Goodgod I rant. Umyes. The next ones probly wont be as big as this, so no getting hopes up, or something XD ... Aww. I love my Jemi and her works.
... WRITE THE FINAL ONE. o_o Incalescence was such a damn tease, I thought it was gonna be the last step~! BUT NOW YOU MUST WRITE NUMBUH FAHVE. *pleady eyes!* ... Or more AIC. That too.
JUST WRITE. I love my jemi!
I ADORED the analogy between Jak and a rock XD but a comfy rock, yknow? It gave such a physical touch/telling sensation to it, t'was so sweet, and such a comparison as Dax would make! Just their silenty-lovey-comfortable interactions and snuggies and shiznit are so ADORABLE ;o; I like the silent touch you add to Jak. He never speaks unless he has to, and it really reflects the old Jak that Dax used to know. (shoot, I realize Im so just quoting the damn fic as I read more XD YOU KNOW THAT I UNDERSTAND IT.)
BWAHAHA. Jak is so gentle, and Daxter's such a cocky, expectant little thing! But at the same time, you made him adorably reluctant to say something mooshy, while the line made me melt XP You can tell he's so new to this~! *SQUEALS* And the kissu MADE ME SO HAPPEH. Just the way you write them, it makes it seem so cuddly, warm, close, all of it! And the idea of Dax snatching kisses in front of people (suuuuch as Keira) to 'make his claim'... XD *giggles* he's so possessive like that.
And at the same time, whilst I LOVE the fluff, I also have a real bit of a fetish with super!dominating/darkish Jak. And YES woman, FEEEEEED my addiciton. FEED EET. *drools* The whole thing, with the finger and the final demanding kiss and the... AND THE... I dunno XD The unsuspectingness of Dax gets me too~! How Jak keeps his silence, but in such a different way that it unnerves him. AND ITS SO DAMN SEXY WHEN HE FINALLY GIVES EEN. XD
Just... haaah. <3 JUST MM. There's always so much mindless passion, no muchu time for talking cos its all so damn all-consuming... Especially with Dax and his little domi!fetish! XD BUT AARRRGH. *melts, just MELTS* Im su excitedish XP *SWEATDROP* Just the way you describe it gets me into fits. FITSSSS. The lag before Jak grabbed Dax into his lap was just like *EYES GO BOOM* ;o; But... RRGH! I wanted more, why doesnt Dax!? WHAAAI?! I cant see him truly refusing Jak, but you pulled it off well and left me very frusterated XD GRRR. GRR, JEMI. I love how awkward it was when they quit, the mutual lust still very much there, but how Jak fixed it all with his immeasurable sweetness ^_^ YES. COLD SHOWER. ( I SO had to ask my friend what that meant.)
Uh, anyways.. *SWEATDROP* Goodgod I rant. Umyes. The next ones probly wont be as big as this, so no getting hopes up, or something XD ... Aww. I love my Jemi and her works.
... WRITE THE FINAL ONE. o_o Incalescence was such a damn tease, I thought it was gonna be the last step~! BUT NOW YOU MUST WRITE NUMBUH FAHVE. *pleady eyes!* ... Or more AIC. That too.
JUST WRITE. I love my jemi!
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, now I have to go and face the demons of FF.net in order to read the other parts of this story! Mind you I very rarely do that, but I love your writing style and seeing Jak and Daxter as how you write them, is like sweet sugar to a diabetic.