AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Heat

by Musashden

person GMB
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You need to add another chapter to this story....Update!
person Ookamiluv
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great! I love It! I usually don't read these fics but I love this one!
I hope you write a lot more in the near future!
And I plan on reading it!
Bravo!
Seeya!
_ Ookami!
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yah! My favorite couple!! I loved the cute little ways Jak and Torn were. Now I'm off to read the other two!

-Black
person Tendrilrake
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... and all that time Zak was in heat, too? Aww!!! Forgive me, I'm jsut thinking everything's cute today- mind you, that wasn't just cute- it was hot!
person Siarra
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What? Was there a plot somewhere? *grins* I thought it was just a very, very good excuse for getting those two to do the nasty naughty.
It was well written and I liked the fresh idea for this. I mean, I don't think that many writers have exploited the fact that we really don't know all that much about their physiology. I like originality.
And the action, oh the steaming hot action...
I'm looking forward to reading more of your works.
person Namachi
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww so cute!
^,^ this fic kicks some butt!
you must write tons more of these two!
person kiva
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow great job, i love this i can't wait to read more of your work. please write more jak and torn.... please
person ja ja
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great work i love the story