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for Your Body: A Traitor

by ChibiShiva

person TheDead
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a nice read ^_^V
person Takayu
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm...so did Jin loose his keys on purpose? There should be another chapter!!!!!
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That is among the top 10 best PWPs I have read and that's saying something. Congradulations.

Pheonix,
Woooooooo!
person Mo
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good and odd at the same time. For some reason all the capitalized yelling totally threw me off.
person Ivy
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(glare at screean, mouth hang, ice cream dripping from spon) God...oh my...(blinks) damn...that was hot...(drool) thehe...I love it and u know it! :p
person Chlover
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh *lights a ciggie*
That was hot! *chokes* oh wait... I don't smoke...
A THREESOME?! You mean Kwans gonna come in, right? I WANNA SEE! WRITE NOW, OR ELSE... I'll... cry! Don't make me fondle you, chibipervidabidooo!!!! lol! Good job.

~Chlover~
person Kairi Fighter and Vampgamer
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kairi: Nice... that was sextastic... I loved it... MWAHAHAHA!!! Flippage rules... mmmmm... lol

Vampgamer: I think this is the first I've read fo Chibi's but it was great