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alright

i loved this xxx

an impressive piece of literature, I must say. the love is so real, the tension so thick, the animosity so gripping; it's like reading a shortened manga. I do have a question for you...you portray Rikku's father as being abusive(I'm going to assume you mean throughout his childhood) and seems to anger easily. did he do anything else to Riku? becuase it seems like he knows more than he should, considering the circumstances. anywhere else, and I wouldn't question it, but...here it seems like Riku's being abused translates into his love for Sora's innocence and non-abusive lifestyle. am I right? am I wrong? only you and you alone can answer my question...I look forward to an answer.

It was really good,i liked it.I thought it was well written.you should write more stories.

Aw that was so sweet! I thought the ending came a little quick because I was wondering if you were going to do anything about Riku and his dad's arguments. But none the less, great fic! I liked it much! Keep up the great writing! ^__^

Holy wow! This was awesome! *squeou wou wrote such a beautiful story. I <3'ed it so much heheh

It was great not only because it was a riku x sora sorta fic, but it actually had a story 'n stuff. most the things you see with them are just sex.. though that's not bad, but you made this niiiiiiiice xD

*_* That was so great! I loved it. It was simply beautiful. a soa so kawaii! Your a really great writer, and you did a great job on their little smut scenes even though they were so young. This is definitely one of my favorites! I really hope you eventually get around to that sequel. ^_~

*giggles and blushes* VERY good! Wonderful, well written, long, and lots of bucking! Perfect! The lemon was just so...yum!

-Zelphie

SEAQAUL SEAQAUL SEAQAUL!!!!!!!

Yes,do write a sequel plz.Aw,what a pity...It would've been so wonderful if you wrote more.*Pouts*But i'll be looking for the sequel!=)