rate_review Reviews

Too Hot For Words.

OMG!!!! That was so hot!!!!!!! *faints*

*claps hands* bravo, bravo! I've just recently started to look into KH yaoi but this fic by far is the best I've read. Riku was played out in such a way that it didn't make it seem unrealistic. You've earned my respect. *bows* And hopefully you'll write more! *hintnudgnudge*

Oh that was great! Sora was so cute. I'm gonna go read your continuation now. ^_~

I so totally love your fic. It's THE best Riku/Sora lemon i've read in my life (according to me anyway). It is so totally THE best. Keep up the good work, and i'll be waiting for more of Riku's lessons...:D

*clapping rapidly* That was the best Sora x Riku lemon I've read yet! You got the total naive aspect of Sora down and the completely more mature aspect of Riku down. Personally I wouldn't think that Sora could do anything without Riku guiding him cause he is basically too kidish (though I love him too death!!!!!) mind wise to realize about orgasms and sex. And it was so beautiful how Riku was kept in character! You've definitely made me appreciate Riku x Sora fics more. Great work and I so have to read the sequel to this one soon.

No, you're not good at writing lemons. And my name is Mickey Mouse. This was so hot. You should definitely write more.

it was good, don't worry ^_-

Ooh! Aw, that was so floaty and cute ^_^ *hugs Riku and Sora* Good boy Riku.
It's okay if you got problems writting teenage smutt, things like those are called morals, something very few people have these days.
A story doesn't need all out smutt to be considered good, sometimes gentle touches 'n stuff is better ^-^

You get in less trouble if you're caught reading it ! XD