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for Serenade of Water

by lparo

person Anon
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why should anyone go easy on you? This is shite. bad grammar, bad style, and you can't even spell Sheikah right. Give up.
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And what the shit is this with you reveiwing your own fic? TWICE? LOL!!!!
person Riyoko
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah another Shiek annk fnk fanfic. Anyways I hope to read more. And hey your doing a good job for a first time writer online. But maybe if you wrote a little more detail in it. It felt real fast for me. I fel like I was reading real fast outloud. Anyways I'm sorry if I sound rude. BUt hey I just wanted to tell you that. But I like it. Hope to read more.
person lparo
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear LINkfan101,
person lparo
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear LINkfan101,
I liked your story but you need to add more text.