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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its easier to read it if you seperate each dialog line so we know whos talking.
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eh...it was alright...the sex was okay, but the format just burned my eyes out. break a space when you have a new speaker, kay?
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can you please write a chapter about Kratos and Raine?
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Genis and Presea are my fav too. I always use one of them when I play the game. I can't wait for the next part. : )
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, not sexy. Poor syntax, worse diction.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story make it a threesome next.
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read all the chapters and I kept reading #3 and that is by far the best chapter I read since I started reading chapter 1. Overall, there is humor in there which I like all fanfics like this to have...not too much but enough on the 'pleasing the reader' scale to please anyone reading. And the story, it was detailed well and I cried several times. Im a big fan of the game and you did it with such passion and romance. I hope your next chapter will be promising and great as the first three. You did well. Very well. #3 is the best you came up with. *uber applause*
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good writing, keep it up, I really enjoyed the first and third stories
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,how about Regal/Alicia before she turns into a monster?
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooooooh. or maybe a long excerpt of the convict when he's masturbating ( in EXTREME detail). hehehe