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OMG, that was AMAZING!!!! They were so in character and the way you write made me seem like I was there watching them while everything was going on. This story is INCREDIBLE. Thanks so much for writing it.

I loved it. Please, Oh please write more of these things. I am egging you, more. This story was so good, so please write more with Leon/Cloud pairings, with Leon being the Semi ;)

omfg! that was so beautiful...I loved it so much. I am overjoyed to have read it. ^.^

wow that was awesome! It has me captivated right till the end!!!

This. Was. Beautiful! Honestly, you did a wonderful job. The imagery, the emotions, the story. It was well written and an overall good story. Well done.

Pretty good. Not too mushy, not too ansty. But there were some things that messed me up. Like when you read it, there were like cloud.cl. There I didn't know what the hell you were trying to say. And like when they were in the resturant and you were describing the red somethings... I assumed that they were red pinstriped suits but I wasn't sure...

Oh, wow..... I don't usually review things, but I just had to! This was so superbly written.... I was overwhelmed. I was so sad during the beginning, because you get into the moods of the characters so easily in this story, and I could just tell that something was wrong. The entire thing was just wonderful.... When Leon finally confessed, I cried. I can't even describe how much I love this...... Anyway, your atttention to detail is incredible and none of the people seemed very out of character. This has GOT to be one of my favorite stories out there. It helps that CloudLeon is my favorite pairing, and there really isn't enough of it, but this is one of the most accurate portrayl of their early relationship that I have seen in a while, and I am extreamly impressed! Anyway, thanks for posting this, I'm very thankful to get to read it!

I can't believe how few reviews this has. It's a beautiful piece... very warm and loving. I ALMOST didn't give it a chance after reading Cloud's vocation was "successful Broadway play director" (I just could not wrap my mind around that) but I'm -so- glad I kept reading. Please consider writing another piece about these two... the world is in dire need of more CloudxSquall.

W00t. This fanfic was amazing. I loved the way you portrayed Leon, it was great. I'm hoping for (possibly) a followup!

I loved the relaxed feeling this fan fiction gave me. The sex scenes weren't too explicit or ill-mannered, and actually made me smile and the tender-loving-care they were giving each other. I like the little appearance of Riku, Sora, Wakka, and Tidus. After that I had a pretty good idea what was wrong with Cloud, though I was wrong in the end, which I liked, by the way. I like being surprised and you did it very well. Loved it. --Brooke