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random hyper person got a aff sccount!!!!!(laughs evily)

Dark Jak: oh dear lord! why?! WHY?!
RHP: do i have to punish you?
DJ: what?... oh bs! your not going to do crap to me
RHP: oh really??? *ahem* you listening Dark?
DJ: to what?
RHP: me! 'As Jak watched, Dark Jak opened his mouth and took the-'
DJ: OH HELL NO YOU ARE NOT GOING TO START READING YAOI INVOLVING ME!
RHP:*grins insanely* '-cock fully into his mouth.
DJ: SHUT UP!
RHP:'Dark Jak began moving his mouth up and down,-'
DJ: NO I DIDN'T! I NEVER DID THAT!!!!!
RHP: what? don't cha remember Dark?...'-sucking hard on Jak’s member.'
DJ: OH MY GOD! SHUT THE HELL UP! THATS DISGUSTING!!
RHP: then why did you do it?
DJ: I DIDN'T! DAMMIT! YOU KNOW THIS IS FICTION!
RHP: sure, then why are you being so defensive?
DJ: I'M NOT BEING DEFENSIVE!! YOUR A SICK, TWISTED, CRAZY FANGIRL!!!
DHP: and your an eco demon that likes to suck-
DJ: THAT'S IT!! *grabs RHP and puts her in the closet, then melts the lock with dark eco*
DHP: *pounds on door* LET ME OUT! WITH YOUR DAMN ECO POWERS!
DJ: okay...since RHP is 'busy' i'll take over she wanted to say that she loved the story and then she was going to most likely keep torturing me with it....sooo...bye cause all i have to say is your sick putting me in that story ...doing...uh...THAT!
RHP: don't you flame my awesome writer person
DJ: your...what?!
RHP: ...nevermind..jjust let me out the closet!!
DJ: uhhh..let me think ...NO!!! anyways..bye!

wow that was great i loved it. I hope to read more of your work.