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A surprising turn of events. Poor Sparx only shows up to be ignored and both Spyro and Isa seem to want each other. It remains but a guess to me how Isa would react upon Spyro's arrival. Nicely written, and I agree with Kuru about Spyro's erecting being a nice addition.

kuruchisu, intersting theory. I haven't really looked towards it from that perspective. I interpret it more as Spyro feeling these things, changes. The problem is that he hasn't got a cleu as to how to handle these feelings, and starts to fear them slightly, thus attempting to avoid them and starting to see them as something hostile... Too bad Isa has to suffer the consequences.

I had some slight problems understanding how everything eatly was supposed to be read, with the flash back. I found it rather confusing in the beginning, but later on got used to it. Nice perspective...
An interesting twist in the story. After chapter 5 it appeared as if both had been willing, but now it seems that there has formed a gap between both Spyro and Isa, due to him retreating. I'm curious as to how it'll continue. As for Sparx, I guess I share the same opinion as kuruchisu does...

Well, just as expected from the cold one. I love this. I like this view upon the young purple hero, one I don't read about a lot, and you tend to write it really interesting. I hand't expected things to turn out like this as well, so that doesn't make it all to predictable. Please, update soon, I'd love the read more...