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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
needs a follow up/ 2nd chapter
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
needs a follow up/ 2nd chapter
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heey, I remember that room! Nice job!
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it, actually. It would have been nice if it were a tad more realistic (i.e. they are trying to seduce him and there's some struggle involved) since the succubus and lilith *are* evil, but from a purely writing standpoint I think you did a good job conveying it. Besides the recommendation of expanding the turn and enchantment of her kiss, etc. etc., this gets an A from me ;D.
I look forward to reading your other things. This is unique, and I'd love to see more along the line of succubi, etc.!
I look forward to reading your other things. This is unique, and I'd love to see more along the line of succubi, etc.!
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Absolutely awesome. I wouldn't have thought I could even picture Soma doing those kinds of things. However, you have made it more than possible and it the greatest way. Kudos to you, my friend.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! I really liked it! If you ever do a Chpt. 2, could you put int Pheresphone (The Maid enemy). Just a suggestion, tis' all >.> Anyway, hope to read something from you agian!
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.... intrigueing to say the least, thankfully they didn't get his soul before I could *evil grin* hehehe, bwehehe, BWAHAHAHAHAH! *cough* a-hem, pardon, I may have had a tad too much sake tonight... regardless, one of the few quality fictions on this backwater site......
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It certainly was an entertaining fic straight out of the game itself. Perfect imagination, too, because I thought the same thing...A lillith and a succubus in a bath, and a black cloak at the end -- to get it, you must first please the women. Haha...
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice job on this one. I was a little put off by the penis growth from Lilith but got over it easily enough. BTW didn't he become Dracula at the end of the game or something to that affect?
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oops make that Eve's penis growning...