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Well written, but I'm not really into the whole "pairing up the hero with the villain for no reason" type of stories. That's like Cloud falling in love with Sephiroth, despite the fact that Sephiroth hurts and kills all of Cloud's family and friends. Think about it logically, if there was someone that screwed you over royally, would you forgive the person and be friend him/her, or wish for the worst case scenario to happen to that person. I'd choose the latter answer. It's only common sense.

Very good. Great sex, great story. I give you five stars.

now, fanfics of this quality are VERY hard to come by...i have to say, you did very well in this story. at first, i was a bit skeptical about the concept, but youve definately made it work (and quite well, i might add). i tip my hat to you, fellow writer. you have definately made a good fic here today ^_^

p.s: keep up the good work!

If I haven't said this before (since I visited this site and read your story a long while back) then let me just say, I loved your story. You're a brilliant writer and I really loved your fanfiction here. Not expecting it and it was very sweet and unusual. 10/10, certainly!

Samus...and Ridley?!? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!!! This is the guy that killed Samus' family and you wanna pair them up?! Are you nuts?!?

A very well written story, good job on writing JUST enough perverted material (not too perverted, but perverted enough) and combined it with the result of having alot of talent for writing. I also found your concept in the story of how two arch-enemies became soul mates very interesting. All in all, a well written story, with enough perverted material combined with a good use of atmosphere-making words, makes this story one of the best pieces I've ever read on Adult Fanfiction.net. Excellent job.

TheDamned

Now comes the million-credit question: She might be a dragon-layer and he a human-fucker, but would they ever think about making children?

And might Ridley learn magics of a different nature (similar to those of the D&D world) such as healing, cure poison, purify food, ease pain and polymorph others (when said kids feel their mixed heritage bring them out of control)?

Could almost be a piece from "Altered Beast"--almost;P

Or a scenario I've seen played on a few fantasy MUCKs as well, human warrior princess, male dragon knight;P

Oh, how to explain "Dad, where did I come from?":P

Ted

Dude awsome fic. i think you should seriously consider coninuing (or letting me, lol) cause it just cant end there.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make another chapter!

That was...awful. Gramatically it was good but the idea just doesn't work on any level.