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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was the world's biggest teaser, ever.
Its really very very good. I never reviewed because I never actually wrote fics, but now that I am, I'll put my two cents in.
9/10.
It would get 10/10, but, honestly, the idea of Geddoe having sex is kinda ew. XP
Its awsomely written though.
Its really very very good. I never reviewed because I never actually wrote fics, but now that I am, I'll put my two cents in.
9/10.
It would get 10/10, but, honestly, the idea of Geddoe having sex is kinda ew. XP
Its awsomely written though.
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! I especially likied how you made Hallec meditate. It's such a personality switch for him, but it also seems to fit well.
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just happened to stop by for the first time in quite a while
and my heart almost stopped when I saw this on the first page
of the latest updates section, then I saw that it said chapter 3 teaser.. =/
Nice addition though, now I know what the meditation was for! =D
Never thought of Geddoe as an old man so I have no
problem with him being in it.
Good work friend!
and my heart almost stopped when I saw this on the first page
of the latest updates section, then I saw that it said chapter 3 teaser.. =/
Nice addition though, now I know what the meditation was for! =D
Never thought of Geddoe as an old man so I have no
problem with him being in it.
Good work friend!
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Please update.
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been wondering: are my stories so exhaustive, that readers simply don't have any energy left to comment? Or is it that my stories are so bare, banal, bereft of any material that would stimulate any thought besides the cheap porn thrill? Or is it, perhaps, society's taboos on sex, still, preventing thinking about sex, and especially voicing out those thoughts? Or the fear of embarrassment, even under the internet's anonymity?
Well, short comments such as the ones above might not have much meat to them, but they do seem to convey a message that the story was good, or at least passable, so perhaps they should be taken as encouragement despite their blunt, inconsiderate style.
Well, short comments such as the ones above might not have much meat to them, but they do seem to convey a message that the story was good, or at least passable, so perhaps they should be taken as encouragement despite their blunt, inconsiderate style.
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do update!
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O Damn. HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Erm I have a question! Instead of having their own...fun...>:)......are they going to actually join in with the others? And where's Jaques and Fred dammit >.< Sorry-I can't help ^ ^; They're so bishie *nose bleeds* o^-^o YAAA *slaps head* Byeeee!
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is surely on my best-lemon-of-all-time top three list. The cast is just great, there really isn't anyone missing.
The best thing though is that it isn't complete and that it just keeps getting better and better.
Can't wait for some more Iku action and to see who might show up next. Keep it going pal, your writing always rock!
/Jake
The best thing though is that it isn't complete and that it just keeps getting better and better.
Can't wait for some more Iku action and to see who might show up next. Keep it going pal, your writing always rock!
/Jake
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it, mainly the part around Geddo shame Queen wasnt around as well keep up my friend keep up
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January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue? Why should I continue? As 'part 1' implies, I intend to, but what reason do I have to?