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Lucia is among my favorite Suikoden girls. I loved the scene where she was getting nailed by Augustine and Geddoe at the same time. I just wish she'd gotten around to some of the other guys.

I'm a newcomer to the suikoden series and this lemon alone is a good reason to pick it up.
I read the entire story in one go. Amazingly hot! Too bad that it had to come to an end. ;-)
The Alman Kinan women are among my favourites but it's kinda odd to think of them as hemaphrodites.
Any chance of a stand alone story of the Yumi & Yuri epilogue?
Many thanks, made my day! I hope to see more!
/RoB

Without a doubt, the hottest story on adultfanfiction.net.

There's always a chance, however slim it may be.

An erotic masterpiece!

Any chance of you doing a follow-up with Hugo, Lucia, and Lily in one hut?

Everytime I think you've outdone yourself you amaze me, style and smut meeting someplace to make something unbelievably good. You rock.

That last chapter was great. It did take me a few days to read all of it because of how long it was. But other than it was wriiten very well and had everthing some could ask for

I've been following Sunny Day since the first chapter was posted and enjoyed it immensely. Overall I believed that Streti did an excellent job writing most of the characters, with/in interesting sexual situations...however...

Chris...throughout the story she's slightly been...out of character...she just isn't Chris...and by then end of chapter 4 you could replace her name with a slutty experienced "pornstar".

While I can imagine Chris "competing for cocks" I cannot imagine her making herself the center of attention - she hates that. Throughout the entire game and manga she has avoided that very thing, only wearing her fame by cause of consequence - she's never sought it out.

Personally I really enjoyed Chapter 4 but I found replacing Chris's name with Jeana's to make for more believable writing. The character Streti created for Chris just isn't Chris - yes she's strong willed but...well...

(now the funny part is back when Chapter 2 came out, I had emailed Streti regarding Chris's involvement and desire to see her in an orgy - and he said he wasn't planning anything like that for her...I wonder what changed his mind?)

Overall good story and nice to see it come to a finished - for that I applaud you Streti!

This epic tale bring tears of joys to my eyes!
So I took the time to read it from the very beginning and despite the vast
timespan between the release of the first and last chapter it's very consistant.
What starts off as an innocent thrill gradually turn into one blissful sex mania.
The first three chapters however are quite sane in comparsion to the last,
but it would be over the top if all chapters were equally intense.

The build ups between the characters are very believable and I think you made a perfect
job picking out the strongest, most representable and most recognized characters from the game.
There are a few exceptions of course, but those that doesn't fall under the above category
where rightfully chosen for having other striking and surprising assets.
There is no one that I miss.

The fourth chapter fulfilled all my hopes and expectations and I couldn't ask for more.
Hugo and Lucia's deviant adventure is beyond arousing and was a must in this story.
The ever wanted oil is an amusing detail as well as the mens hopping back and forth between
the ladies. Iku's and Chris's raunchy determination while competing for the men is incredibly hot.
Luckily they both got a fair share of members to enjoy.

I totally love the character conclusions at the end! They are simply brilliant
and give the story a final touch that is strongly connected to the game.
Congratulations you just finished On a sunny day!

Hats off!!


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I sure don't mind the length of the story but it might scare off some readers and
possible reviewers, I don't know. I am however amazed and impressed by the linguistic variety
and broad vocabulary in your writing. It's what makes your stories unique and
despite the absent of reviews I believe and hope that you still have alot give
and that this is not your final lemon.

For those who were disappointed by my last post here's the sought-after murial.
It was made before chapter 4 was released so it does not quite follow the ACTUAL events.
http://jace.125mb.com/sunny/SunnyDay03_large.jpg

That was some great sex. I always can't to read more of your stuff it's always so massive each one is almost an epic. That why your such a great writer you try to out do yourself everytime