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for Legacy of the Lunar Spear

by CPascal42

person DeadHorse
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, here were i share my opinion i guess.

First off, I liked Lu Bu as a father, thats how all fathers should be-kinda-with there little girls. He scares the living shit outta me when i actualy play Dynasty worriors though, he always kicks my ass. I didn't like that he died, but...Cao Cao is pretty awsome.

Second, Ling lu (hope i spelled that right) Is also kick ass, reminds me of myself. But, the revenge thing, i dunno. Cao Cao could be a great exception for her father, if only she weren't bent into a pretzel.

Third, DUN!, hes so great! HeHe. I like tall dark and hansomnesss with alittle spice. Hes as hot as she is (not talking sexual) But if he showed only alitle compassion to her, just alittle, instead of always t elling her she is expendible, then that might be nice to. But still have him kick ass, kicking ass is fun.

And thats my Rewiew...uh, summed up, from all of the former chaps. Can'y wait to read the newer ones. ^^
person Dead Horse
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ling Qi, sorry.
person Mayu
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you wrote another chapter! *I couldn't wait any longer for it ;)*

I trulljoy joy this fic, *praise, praise* hands down. Even tho' Yuan is incredibly OOC it's fun to see him goof around. He is much more a likable person here then in the game or *hell* in the history book! lol. Even if we got little to know about Zhi, he is such an adorable person. The only "intellectual" one in the whole Cao family!

What really made me feel better *and like Ling Qi more* was her comment on the Qiaos. Finally, someone tells the truth!
*mutters* horrible, annoying, jester girls *mutters*
person DeadHorse
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey hey!, great chapter. Wel you know my e-mail, so...when ya get chapt 14 up, please send itme. me.

^^

Thanks.
person DeadHorsefloatin.
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is a good story. When ya get the reaminning chapter up, e-mail me.

Thanks.
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yea yea! more more! This is like the thousand and eigthed time I've reviewed this over here. Let's see if it actually goes through. Seriously, adore it. Want more! more! more!