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by Rurichan

person Itavita
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic made me immensely happy (though not what happened to my dear Zombiefied Henry. D: *loves him dearly*). Poo on Walter if he can't appreciate the idea of two Henry's running around. *squeezes them both* :3
person N. Fasciitis
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally, some Silent Hill shounen-ai! So much possibility with the series and people waste it all on original characters and mary sues. *sigh* Anyhoo, your story was interesting, though the details made it a little hard to follow but it contributed to the point of view you were writing from.

You've got a pretty good flow here with this fanfic though Walter sounds a tad bit off. I didn't get the impression in the game that he even bothered with a sense of humor or mocking people even. That irked me ever so slightly but it's nothing too big. You were lucky since you got to play around with characterization with Mumbling Henry, which I might add was an interesting idea since he's only one of the hauntings in the apartment(I've seen him a couple of times) and you decided to delve and develop him on your own.

A small bias here: You had Walter in it. I love you now.

Hopefully, you'll write more shounen-ai(or yaoi/slash) about Silent Hill. (BIAS ALERT!)Preferably with Walter.... for Walter is cool.

person J-chan
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was a great story... I'm almost done with this game, just need to rent it again... -poor- ;.;

Henry is an awesome character, and very realistic but kind of blonde (though he is a brunette) but the coolness is there and you showed that really well in the small part that the real Henry was in. This story made me think of a picture I found where henry is outside of his own door and he's looking at himself, which had confuseed the hell out of me.

You also potrayed Walter really well, and I am, sadly, a Walter fan. (is it just me, or does he kind of look like Kurt Cobain from Nirvana?)

Keep up the good work!
person Cidsa
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome story!
I haven't really gotten that far in the game yet (I'm almost done the prison) but I was spoiled on a lot of things previously anyway XD
Henry was the coolest Silent Hill character so far...and I'm a geek for saying this, but he was hot too XD

I will definetly read this again once I beat the game, then some parts will probably make more sense to me XD