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You have ruined everything

Oh, shit, not much time to review but I will...I hope. If I don't get to finish this please don't maim me, PLEASE! Maybe we should declare 'Slap Sora's Das Day' as a national holiday! I don't know. I think I'm slowly slipping into insanity thanks to my TV/PS2/PC/novel-writing High. I have no time for school work anymore...Oh, well fuck it all. Anyway, very funny. Yeah, how are they gonna fit all three of them on Riku's motorcycle? Poor little angel Sora, Riku is so lusting after him and he didn't even know it, he can be so naive. I think that's all I have to say...Wait,wait...something's coming...oh, yeah, everyone's heard of the 'Heartless' but what about...
'The Muffinless' ? *glances side to side quickly* Just an inside joke, just laugh...LAUGH DAMN YOU! Anyhoo, Great chapter, looking forward to reading more of this fanfic!

JA NE!

coolness! im seriously getting into this fic, oh! and i soooo knew Riku was going to have Sora get angel wings X3 ive got like a sense about tho sort of things XPPP anywho! update soon kay? ja!

I still love this story! I was going to go to school today but decided against it. Man do my teachers give me a headache! Fuck them, the bastards! Anyway, Your grammar has improved so much since the first chapter, maybe you should go back and read it over and then read your latest installment. It's pretty amazing if you ask me. Man, what took you so long, I was getting so bored. None of the fanfics I have been reading have produced any new chapters yet and I'm stuck being bored. Damn it all! Great chapter. By the way, when is Riku finally gonna get some?

Kya Tokina

Yo! How's it goin'? Your fic is getting better with every chapter! I'm serious, it's finally starting to rock! I hope to find out how the two are going to condition themselves. Damn those fucking clifhangers. It sounds like Sora's having a bit of trouble with his 'little friend'. I can't help but laugh at the uber funny situations you put the poor boy in! LOL Sorry I had to be such a bitch in my last review, I wasn't feeling to hot at that time, still don't know why. As I probably said before (sorry I can't remember what I've said from one second to another) your fic is getting pretty awesome! Yeah for you and your almost shocking improvement in grammar since the first chapter!

Interesting...it's the best word I can come up with right now, sorry. If I wasn't so fucking tired myself I would have said something poetic or other but my head is totally spinning. I feel like I was just punched in the stomach while having the worst hang-over of my entire life, but I'm not drunk. Damn school, it's friggin killing me. Any way, this is pretty awesome. Original and interesting is a way to put it. It's usually Riku who is the heavy cusser in most fics but this is a pretty cool change of pace. Gotta go, I'm starting to see little beds floating around my head. being woosy is one thing I'm not good at ignoring. Well, keep writing, it's pretty great so far! ^-^!!!!!!!!!!!

Interesting...it's the best word I can come up with right now, sorry. If I wasn't so fucking tired myself I would have said something poetic or other but my head is totally spinning. I feel like I was just punched in the stomach while having the worst hang-over of my entire life, but I'm not drunk. Damn school, it's friggin killing me. Any way, this is pretty awesome. Original and interesting is a way to put it. It's usually Riku who is the heavy cusser in most fics but this is a pretty cool change of pace. Gotta go, I'm starting to see little beds floating around my head. being woosy is one thing I'm not good at ignoring. Well, keep writing, it's pretty great so far! ^-^!!!!!!!!!!!

I must read morrre!! Please continue ^__^

that waz great!!!!ant wait 4 the rest of the story.

I like it