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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o,m,g.i just read the yaoi chapter.(i wasnt sure if i should review here at aff,or ff so i decided to review here).it was excellent.why do you beat yourself up so much.to me it seems you have untouchable skills.keep it up.you put yourself in the story almost like your there.i love your work.please respond to me at fanfiction not at adultfanfiction.i can finally picture riku being gay.he doesnt seem like the father tipe anyway.i enjoyed the yaoi chapter,hope you write more,and ill be on the look out for more chapters (both yaoi and regular)
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gomen nasai!!!!! *shity eyes* I haven't been able to read any fanfiction for quite a while so P L E A S E don't hurt me for not reviewing. Oh yeah, the yaoi chapter was pretty good! I am still a devoted stalker of the one called Theo (namely, you) and your fanfiction.net name (cammi-world or something, was it?) as well. The reason for my absence was purely the fault of my damned High School. I hate it sooooo much. Anyway. Great writing!
Baibai,
Kya Tokina
Baibai,
Kya Tokina
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November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was a very good lemon and a good story over all. I'm still perfecting my own yaoi so I know how it feels trying to write one of those when ur used to hetrasex. No offense to anyone.
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY riku/sora lemony goodness! i cant wait for the next chapter on ff.net and i hope there are more good lemoo loo look forward too!
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi hi member me from fanfiction.net i love this entire story hurry and update please and thank you =^^=
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great story! Seriously I hope you update it soon!
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol... I'm soo glad you posted this! I was waiting all weekend! *glomps* It was a really good first lemon scene... I enjoyed it, at least. ^___^ It was, again, an excellent first lemon. I bow to your first-lemon genius... *bows*
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good job ^^ it was awesome, write more!! i wanna see how the shower goes X3 update soon!
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo Sora and Riku got it on! I like the chapter plz update soon!!!!!!
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
he owe ow sides hurt! funny more pleeasseee!