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for Messed up life

by Alyx

person Anon
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
squirell boy try choke sora. . .squirrrrrrrrrelllllly...........................................................................................................SQUIRRRRRRRRRELLLLLLLEEEEEYYYYY! XD
person Anon
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEEEZ DO MORE ASAP! DO IT NOW BITCH! I mean uhhhhhh. . .BYE!
person YouWish
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you have an interesting sttory premise, and I like it but something just seems sort of wrong. And by the way, if you got your information about ecstasy from users then...well, i'll just leave it at that. Anyway goodluck with this project, and I would offer that maybe you could try to be less crude because it is somewhat discracting-takes me away from the story when i read so much at one time. Goodluck and I hope you are well recieved.
person Rose Fury
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha, ha, ha! This is hilarious!. Sora on booze and ectasy!
it was sexy too. You rock! Siriusly!
person Anon
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can i violate Sora. . .and Riku? no seriously. can I? pwitty pweez? aw come on? share em.
person Iri-chan
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, nice story. It's weird trying to envision Sora and Riku like that, but entertaining as well. So is this going to tie into the games at all? Update soon! And with the mother problem, heh, you're not alone. I was so happy when my dad told my mom he was divorcing her sorry ass. Finally, someone else who understands why you'd be happy to find that out.
person brit
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG YOU FINALL Y UPDATED!! THIS WAS A COOL CHAPTER!!! WHOO HOO!! please please i cant wait till the next chappy! ^__^
person Anon
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
riku rape sora :P...riku rape sora and sora no likey?!...riku rape sora and sora be sad like mrs. sophia on the color purple?...riku rape me me no be sad me be happy!:D...good story...i see dead people MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHMUAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! XD
person Wings of Ebony
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Theo...You probably don't know of THIS name so I just have to tell you...I changed my reviewing name from 'Kya Tokina' to 'Wings of Ebony' . Yeah...I'm back! Yay! Riku got Sora high! That's hilarious! I mean...'Sora' and 'high' just don't go together. Slipknot! Awesome music pref. Wish I had a CD but my rents keep telling me that I'm not allowed to buy that music because it's 'satanic'. I think I'll go buy a CD and slip it under my matress. Frick...spelling's off today. Oh well. Please update! This is like one of the only KH fics that involves emo at all! It sucks but I guess it's good for youu, I mean really, being one of the only one's to try something like this has to rake in the reviews. Well, I've ranted enough. Awesome job. BAIBAI
~Wings of Ebony
person Ryo
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, I'm loving this fic. Can't wait for the next chapter! Somewhere along the lines are you going to have Sora's mum come and find him? That would be a trip... haha